This is the sixth chapter of my story. Like always I would love to hear all of your comments and criticism as well as any title ideas you may have. Overall I'm pretty satisfied with how this chapter turned out but I want to hear what everybody else thinks. If you see any mistakes in spelling, grammar or even just the story in general, please let me know. Thanks for reading, enjoy!
This is the fifth chapter of my story. Overall I think it is okay but something seems to be missing...I think it might be how the characters react, or more so their lack of reaction to the situations that unfold...Any ideas? Anyway like always please tell me what you think! I love to hear all comments so even if they are negative I'd love to hear the criticism. Like I said, I'm not fully pleased with this so if you have any ideas as to why that may be or how it can be fixed, please let my know. Okay well, here it is, enjoy!
This is a short story that just came to me and I decided to write. I started with the same beginning and ended up making two different stories off of it (I'm not yet finished with the other version). I hope you enjoy it and please leave any comments you might have!
Here is the fourth chapter of my story. It takes us to the Fire Realm and introducing yet another set of characters. I know this might be going fast, but I think it might make more sense as the story progresses. Like always all comments and criticisms are welcome as well as any title ideas (does it get annoying hearing me say that so much?) Anyway, enjoy!
This is the third chapter of my story (again title ideas are welcome). I looked edited it from the original version (right now I'm going over my entire story that I've written so far) so hopefully there aren't too many errors. As always I'd love to hear anything and everything that you have to say! Comments, criticisms, everything is welcome! I know that I'm introducing yet another set of characters and that some of you have mentioned that this is going a bit fast; don't worry, I'm considering this and working on it! Alright, well, enjoy!
This is one of my many poems that I have written. Well, maybe not really a poem, not really a story either...I'm not really sure what to call it exactly. I guess that is one of the things you can decide, as well as how you like it (please let me know both of these answers!) Like I have said before, I just kind of go along and see where the writing takes me.
This is a poem that I wrote about a week or so ago. It is common for me that when I write, that some other source beside myself comes up with the ideas and I just follow along and write them out. This was once such experience and I have to say, I rather like how it turned out. Please comment on what you like and don't like, and yeah... thanks for reading!
Okay so here is the second chapter of my story. As always title ideas are more than welcome as well as any comments, criticism or suggestions. I realize that this is a pretty short chapter but it is very important to the story so bear with me. This is a rough draft, nowhere near being done so any errors you find I would love to hear. Knowing that it is a rough draft you will hopefully forgive me for saying that I have not yet gone over it to edit it. I really want to get everyone's opinion on it so when I finally do find time to edit it, along with the rest of the story, I have other perspectives besides my own. Well, I've talked enough for now, so enjoy!
Okay, here is the first chapter of my story. I know it doesn't give very much information but I meant for it to feel that way to keep everyone reading! Anyway, please tell me what you think (anything and everything is welcome) and if you have any title ideas please let me know. So, yeah, enjoy!
Okay, this is one of the stories that I have been working on for a really long time. The prologue is a newer addition but I think it was needed. Anyway, I am pretty far (well sort of) in the story but I don't want to overwhelm you with all, like 12 chapters right away so I'll add them one at a time. This story does not have a title yet so if you have any ideas, please let me know! Constructive criticism is more than welcome as well as any other comments you might have. There might be some spelling and/or grammar errors, if you find any, please let me know. I want to get this story published so I want it to be the best it can be! Well, I think that's all I have to say for now, enjoy!