This was my first experiment with sword & sorcery stories. Comments of any kind will be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
This is the story of Rona Ilymin, a young woman learning to be Ravlei, a manipulator of the elements.
This is based on a traditional Chinese legend. There are probably many problems with the conventions, not all of the dialogue sounds real. If you can help me out, please comment or e-mail! Thanks!