Well here it is, the long awaited new scene from Fade to black. Thanks to everyone who kept pestering me. I hope this doesn't dissapoint you. It is shorter than some of my other chapters, but it is also one of the more dramatic. It was difficult to write. I have now also given this story to a friend here, who has offered me some great advice on how to improve the story so far, to make it more publishable. So I will also start to update the earlier chapters... He thinks that the vampire needs a proper description for instance and also that I need to put more in about the freaks and not sideline them so quickly... well, what do you think? Any ideas?
Okay this is for Satans Daughter and Petrik, but be warned it gets less and less proof read from here.... I'll put in up to chapter 6 (which is my favorite.)
I realised the first chapter was just so much set up, that things really didnt get interesting till this chapter so I figured I'd better include it. If I get good response on these two chapters, Ill publish the next 2:)