This is the second account of Jayde's point of view. In this chapter, they arrive at the Headquarters (the Wolf's Den), which is totally uber. tell me what you think and leave me comments!!
This story is turning out SOOO uberly awesome. I absolutely love all the ideas. I don't really like the title right now, so if you can think of a better one i'd love to hear it. Maisha deserves credit and tons of thanks for helping me brainstorm for this story and editing it for me. THANX AGAIN!! enjoy, and leave me comments!!
HEHE.. finally got the second chapter up. YAYness!! chapter should be up soon too, although it has way more crackers in it than this one or any of the others do. I'm uploading it ANYHOO because I WANTED AN UPDATE!!! lol... ok done.
YAY!! this one definetely has the most editing to do, because i just added in 2 scenes and took out one of them, but i like the over all result. wow i really need to lay off on the dialogue... and about 6 months ago i was avoiding it. It's funny how those things work... bah...
This is the second chapter from Raevyn's point of veiw, and it moves the plot along a little bit more. Of course, another character is introduced. and this is another one of my favorites!! bwahaha, another guy. lol. anyhoo, tell me what you think. Same with all of my story, this is a WIP, so don't be too critical. : )
This was the second or third chapter of my story, but i moved it to sixth. lol... and it will most likely be pushed back again to chapter 8, but for now, it is chapter 6. lol... This is prolly the most important chapter yet, because it introduces the *main* plot, the reason it's named TMotSC, and lots of other complications to the story.It also needs the most work, so give me some editing tips!! Leave me cmments!!