I plan to make a space-type story with the ghost of a military leader singing the history of the destruction of his planet. This is the song.
A story about a race of mages called Oranjios. Oranjios were once human, but were Changed into semi-immortal beings with powerful magic. They age about 10 years per century. Please leave tips on how I should continue the story, and put some suggestions on morphing into them. And, for those of you who say I need to use outlines: I DID use an outline for this, but the details I put in kind of didn't work for original outline, so I figured I could scrap it (the outline). Where should I go from here?
I read a comment on my original story, Merchina Moon, and suddenly my WB disappeared! I changed it so that it can work as a first chapter OR as a short story. I'll leave Merchina Moon up for a while so that readers can decide which they like better. I also changed Krangisha's name to simply 'Gisha'.