This is a sci-fi transformation into freedom. I've been doing poetry in my english class, and I thought I should put one up. Constructive criticise this to death please. I'd like all the help possible. :)
It's a story based on a true story in my life. I've converted it into a fantasy poem in hopes to relieve some stress.
This is a story I wrote in 8th grade. My teacher liked it and so did I. I'd like some advice because writing isn't my strongpoint.