Word count is now 28,643. ^^ Up to this chapter of course. I'm currently checking over chapters six and seven, making sure than the plot and references are correct and on track.
... I could use any advice people have...such as if the plot moves to slowly or if I'm not descriptive enough...constructive critisizm please. Otherwise it's no use to me.
This, like Chapter 1, is technically a second draft, however I will repeat that there is very little word for word or even rearranged verbatism. The first draft bits are extended notes that are frankly not the right format for a story anyway. XD
This chapter is technically a second draft as I did use notes that were from handwritten pages. It is altered severely, however, and very little is word for word verbatism of the first draft.