|22 Feb 2003|| Lin|
What? No comments yet? This is absolutely amazing, it's emotions turned into words, made my eyes water. Brian Buckley
replies: "Hey, thanks - you have sort of a way with words yourself there."
|26 Mar 2003|| Olive|
You say that you're not proud of it, but I think it's fabulous. It gave me the heebee geebees.
So much emotion! Wow. Anyway, consider yourself talented. All your hardwork is paying off. Brian Buckley
replies: "That's one of the cool things about writing - it affects different people in very different ways. I'm glad you like this."
|18 May 2003|| Nina|
Great work! The rhyming is great, and the rhythm works too! *sigh* Why can everyone BUT me write long poems that make sense?
|2 Jul 2003|| Kelsey 'Siren' Paulus|
I could probably read your worst poem ever written (in your eyes) and still be amazed. I like this one a lot. It seems like rhymes just flow naturally out of you. If ever I were to speak to you, I would expect that what you say would rhyme. It seems like you don't spend minutes trying to figure out what rhymes with other words... Brian Buckley
replies: "This is a great kind of compliment to receive, because natural-sounding rhyming is always one of my goals in poetry. I do, however, spend a long time trying to come up with good rhymes - I can't just come up with them on the spot, unfortunately!"
|23 Aug 2003|| Leigh *Shwin* Erickson|
Wow... wow... wow *shakes head* Your poetry seems to do that to me a lot... *shakes head again* I agree. Your rhyming is not forced, you have one of the most wonderful talents I have ever seen here on Elfwood. You're just amazing. Thank you for sharing all that you have! Brian Buckley
replies: "Thank you. I've never been all that happy with this poem personally, but I'm glad you like it."
|2 Feb 2008|| Dalton|
Which ones are fantasy writing?
|22 Dec 2010|| Spooxi|
Awww *cries* So sad, so so sad!
|10 Jun 2011|| Anon.|
Wonderful ending! The wizard at her feet