|1 Oct 2007|| Alex H. McKinnon|
Good grief, that was fantastic! That's one of the best poems I've read in a long time. Give me your brain for study, young'un, i want to extract your writing lobes for my devious purposes *holds up shiny sharp thing*
|14 Aug 2008|| CJ O´Shea|
*soft smile* It is comforting to see that the art of the ballad is not so far lost after all, and that bards do yet walk this late age of the world. It is truly a blessing a gift to be able to delight in your words, Master Bard, for they are to a kindred flame like sunlight to a bloom.
|4 Dec 2008|| Wanderer|
’cosmic light show’ and ’danced through the night like two sailing ships’ are a bit awkward, the the rest is as perfect as always!!!!!!
|4 Apr 2009|| Rebekah Lynn Plowman|
wow, that was amazing! its like an epic battle of fire and ice. wait, was that what it was supposed to be anyway?
|16 Sep 2009|| Katya Genaddievna Lastovkina|
wow. You are a master of imagery. You make me want to write poems again.
|22 Dec 2010|| Spooxi|
Wow, wonderful imagery! A brilliant take on a day by day occurence, it’s got a ring of the old epics to it!
|15 Nov 2012|| Lily Firiel Archer|
BEAUTIFUL. At first I was just enjoying the rhyme scheme, but this is something else. I never thought of a sunrise as a battle before...
|15 Nov 2012|| Jan Inge Nygård|
love the poem, and the rhyme. It flow so naturally!!
|17 Mar 2013|| Josie Theresa Whitehead|
Your writing of poetry is truly amazing Brian. It is difficult today to find good writers, but here I’ve discovered one that I didn’t know existed until today. Congratulations!