| 20 Jun 2003 | Diana M Chien | Loading...Another great representation of the passage of time. The first stanza (especially its first line) is a perfect opening to the whole poem, very bold and strong. The rhyme scheme here is indeed interesting, if a little hard to catch onto at first. | |
| 17 Jul 2003 | Ailsa 'Allie' Joy | Loading...Your rhymes are so clever- each verse is linked to the last. I love the whole "plot" line that you follow- what a beautiful description of a faded legend! Brian Buckley replies: "I think you're the first person to read this poem who's mentioned anything about the rhymes linking each stanza to the previous one. Good eye!" | |
| 1 Aug 2003 | Camilla 'Motone' Whitney | Loading...The once and future king!! W007! That's awesome I totally love it. Plus it had a scheme I recognized (though I can't remember the name of it). Needless to say, you're a great poet. Brian Buckley replies: "If you recognized the scheme, you're way ahead of me - I pulled it basically out of nowhere. I'd be interested to know what its name is. As for "the once and future king" - you probably already know this, but for anyone who doesn't, I didn't invent that line. It comes from the end of a much older work called "Le Morte D'Arthur" (I think that's how it's spelled). Supposedly these words appear on Arthur's tombstone." | |
| 6 Aug 2003 | Leigh *Shwin* Erickson | Loading...Wow... *is inspired to go write more poetry* wow... can I print things in your gallery? Your work is amazing... just stunning... I'm sure I could come up with some criticism if I thought hard enough, but for now I'm quite content just to revel in the beauty of this... Brian Buckley replies: "Thank you very much!" | |
| 13 Aug 2003 | Tanya Kozik | Loading...Well, I can't seem to get off this gallery... Drat. >_< nifty verse scheme you got going there. How in the WORLD do you manage to seem to have such ease with expression? | |
| 13 Dec 2004 | Sierra C. Clifford | Loading...Wow. Special. I love the rhyme scheme, it flows very nicely. You are skilled indeed. | |
| 25 Sep 2005 | Meg Rachor | Loading...The words were great, but I'm not so sure I liked the flow of it. It seemed a little awkward at times, but of course it could just be me. Otherwise, great job. | |
| 16 Sep 2008 | Donna Viessman | Loading...I really like your poem. very moving. | |
| 21 Nov 2008 | Melissa marie canaway | Loading...The english language is a miraculous thing, but even it has no words to describe this-this... as I said; there are no words to describe how amazing this poem truly is... | |