| 16 Jan 2007 | Cali Penny | Loading...Oh! This was chilling and wonderful. Jumping in the middle like you did was amazing. I write too, and generally I don't care for poetry for I read it terribly poorly - I never get the rhythm correct so I mess up the story the author is trying to weave, but this....I've read and reread it four times now! Such a ballad! I wonder what this would sound like if you were to set this wonderful poem to song! Absolutely wonderful. Love it, please do write more scraps from the burned library as you find them impaled on branch tips, or folded into mouse burrows. Hunt, my dear, Hunt for them, then if you please, set them all down here for us to revel in the phrasing and imagery. Thank you for sharing this little scrap with us! Cali Penny | |