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"Creatures of the Night" by Andreia Diónis

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A poem about a woman

Creatures of the night

I see them,

Dark creatures with dark feelings

They are haunting me during the night

Waiting to take me life.

Whispers in my mind

Voices calling my name

I'm waiting for tomorrow

For someone to come and save me from them.

I'm afraid,

Everything is so dark

They are so dark, but so beautiful.

It´s cold tonight, tears freeze in my face

Please, come and save from my sad destiny.

The ritual is finished, my fate awaits me

Once again voices in my head:

“Welcome to the endless road of immortality

and the world of the undead”

A new life is upon me.

Cold blood runs in my veins

I feel thirst for new blood

A vampire I became

A creature of the night I am.

Date	Name	Comment
4 Jan 2006	Laura de Lange	Loading... Does first comment dance spinning round and round and round until she is dizzy Lovely poem about becoming a vampire. I like the voices in her head. Maybe just a tad cliche?
22 May 2006	Rochelle Leya Watts	Loading... A little cliche, but since the poem is pretty simple it is not hard to wander the edge of that. I do like the last two lines, with became being past tense and am being present its heightens the feeling of change. Intersting.

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