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"Hope" by Andreia Diónis

SF&F Picture 4 out of 6 by Andreia Diónis

Hope is one of the best things we have

At the eve of battle,

The angels fell from the sky

And lie death in the ground.

The evil god,

That no one dares to speak the name,

Murdered all the protectors of Man.

They thought

They were doom to live in slavery,

To live a life of unbearable suffering.

The elves started to lose their glow,

Hope was leaving them,

Swords were drop

Armors undress.

Was then that something sound in the air:

“This is our world, I'll die before He takes it!

He'll not prevail!”.

The evil god appeared

With a perverse smile

Clapping for the bravery of the young boy.

Swords and armors were no longer in the ground

And on the other side hope comes in aid

The mages decided to join this last fight.

Many fall, very few survived.

Never was seen such a battle

Such anger, hatred, will to stay alive.

The evil god

Was captured and later killed.

Never underestimate the power of hope

Even when everything seems to be lost.

Hope never dies

←- Deceiver, part two | The necromancer -→

Date	Name	Comment
8 Sep 2005	Julia Anna Rill	Loading... Great poem, fantastic story and excellent message! is there anything else to say? i think not! i really like your work. amazing imaginary! Andreia Diónis replies: "I think hope is one of the most beautifull things we have."
15 Sep 2005	Larry N. Morris	Loading... The poem is fine, but you might want to post it in a larger font. Make it easier for people to read.
22 Sep 2005	Ryan Heartfield	Loading... I like your poem, good imagery, thank you for commenting on my work aswel.
23 Sep 2005	Ralph Miller	Loading... Very nice work. And so true!
27 Sep 2005	Lisa Fay	Loading... You are a wondeful writer! Keep going with it. Have you evr puplished anything? You'd be great. And just remember to keep having fun with it. Once it becomes work you won't be able to do as well. (: Andreia Diónis replies: "Thank you so much! I don´t have nothing published yet but who knows, maybe in the future. "
10 Nov 2005	Luis Filipe dos Reis Peres	Loading... Beautiful ! I loved this one ! I´m not a writer but i´m into illustration and your work just gave me an idea for a picture...bye ! Andreia Diónis replies: "Thank you, if you published that picture please let me known, I´ll love to see it."
28 Nov 2005	Miguel Borges	Loading... N comento o teu trabalho pq me tocou bastante... E qd se gosta gosta... Se tiveres interessada em produzirmos algo, entra em contacto cmg! Gostava d tentar dar cor ao teu texto... Qd falo em cor falo em visualidd! Pq d texto e msg tens td n me interpretes mal... Andreia Diónis replies: "Seria interessante, se quiseres podes fazer imagens baseadas nestes meus poemas e publicar que nao me importo. Se o fizeres depois diz algo para eu as ver."
4 Jan 2006	Laura de Lange	Loading... Hope is powerful. As are words. Keep on writing! Andreia Diónis replies: "Thank you. Hope is wonderful!!!"
31 May 2006	Marta L. Pato	Loading... Este poema está um espetáculo! A esperança é um dos maiores valores que temos, é algo que devemos preservar até ao último dos momentos. Tens imenso jeito! This poem is amazing! Hope is one of the biggest values we have, and must be preserved until the last moment. You're really skilled!
19 Nov 2006	António M. C. Terra	Loading... Bem, de todos os teus poemas, este é sem dúvida o meu preferido. Adorei mesmo. Adorei tanto o poema como a mensagem, que não podia estar mais correcta, mas a maneira como a transmitiste no poema está simplesmente excelente. É sem dúvida dos melhores poemas que já vi no Elfwood. E o mais importante de tudo, nota-se que foi escrito com a alma.
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