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Andreia Diónis

"The necromancer" by Andreia Diónis

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Revenge can lead to madness
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Once I saw the light

But now darkness grows

On the depths of my broken soul.


The black power is consuming my life

With every word spoken,

I had trade the mortal life for the immortal death.


Only the night understands

The pleasure that I have in kill,

Feel the blood in my hands

Feeding my thirst for destruction.


I can walk in death,

I can play with life.

Give and take

Is a power beyond dreams


I can save a soul

But not my one,

She is going to the forgotten abyss,

Little by little,

And with her goes all my human feelings.


She was taken of me,

Ripped of my arms

And still I feel her tears in my chest,

She was taken of me,

My love…


And now I take from others,

They will suffer like I did

And I live for the day

That I will kill

And toss the murderer soul

To hell,

Away from all salvation

Where only the pain lives.

←- Hope | You are my light -→

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8 Sep 2005:-) Julia Anna Rill
This is very sad... I like it though, but it is sooooooo sad!!! Poor necromancer!!

:-) Andreia Diónis replies: "I know, I feel sorry for him to and the reason I make it so sad was because the message of the poem: revenge isn't good at all, it takes your life away."
15 Sep 2005:-) Larry N. Morris
Another good poem. Very well done. You might want to consider replying to the comments you get. Some people won't comment if they think you don't bother looking at them. There are also those who enjoy reading all the comments and replies.

:-) Andreia Diónis replies: "I know, but i didn´t have time to reply the comments till today. I'm really happy you like my poems because I think you are great writer. Good luck with Kingdom Ablaze."
20 Sep 2005:-) Miguel Borges
Oi, espero que continues o bom trabalho e obrigado pelo teu comentario na minha galeria, tinha medo que ninguem comentasse os meus desenhos, adoro o poema !!!!!
30 Sep 2005:-) R. 'Icthulu' McCarty
As much as I like "Hope" I like the content of this one just a bit more. Nice work and I look forward to more from you.

2 Andreia Diónis replies: "Hi, I also like this a bit more. Thanks for your comment."
10 Nov 2005:-) Luis Filipe dos Reis Peres
Your work is excelent ! You know how to create an atmosphere with words ! Powerful stuff.

18 Andreia Diónis replies: "Thanks, I like to create an atmosphere."
9 Dec 2005:-) Emma Kathryn McDonald
Wow, this is so sad but so powerful at the same time! Great work! Oh it so beautiful! I really liked this one! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!!!
Lotsaluv, Em
16 Aug 2006:-) Iris F. Houten
Wow, i really like this. It's very sad, and it let you see what the feelings of a necromancer are and what he does. i really, really like this!
19 Nov 2006:-) António M. C. Terra
Outro poema excelente que tens aqui, embora o "Hope" ainda seja o meu preferido. E novamente, também este tem uma importante mensagem, ŕs vezes deixamos os pensamentos negros tomar conta de nós a tal ponto que de certa maneira cegamos, e acabamos por nos fechar a toda a vida. Novamente, mais um poema muito bom que tens aí.
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About 'The necromancer':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Andreia Diónis
 • Copyright: ©Andreia Diónis. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Necromancer, Death, Lost, Love, Revance
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 142


More by 'Andreia Diónis':
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