| 30 Mar 2004 | Stahl | Loading...I like it. Especially when you read the text afterwards. It makes me feel for her. But one thing i don't understand, the man swinging a sword!! Who is he??? is he with her or is it him who killed her??? Nice picture anyway. Especially shadings. I see you put a lot of work in that and the result is tremendous. Jeroen Admiraal replies: " The dude with the sword is not the one who killed her, the other two archers did. But they won't get away with it! " | |
| 29 Apr 2004 | Senka | Loading...deze is erg mooi, vooral door het stukje tekst erboven, het maakt het iets emotioneler. de uitdrukkingen op de gezichten zijn goed, maar ik denk dat als je de gezichten uit dit plaatje zou halen en ze ergens anders zou plaatsen, dat de uitdrukkingen dan niet erg duidelijk zullen zijn. Misschien kan je daar nog aan werken  Jeroen Admiraal replies: "Yes I am not so strong in making faces I think. " | |
| 26 Jun 2004 | Salzubar | Loading...Gee... I've studied German and I can almost read the above comment, it's Dutch isn't it? I quite agree, the faces aren't the best part of this pic, but I think it doesn't really matter because it's otherwise so good. This is a picture I would even call "art", it has some sort of depth. I like the leaf, the archers' armours are also good. Jeroen Admiraal replies: "Wow..thank you. It has been a while since I made this picture and I recon that some things should get a little more attention. But apparently the story and the more complicated contact between the characters still shines through." | |
| 27 Jun 2004 | | Loading...That girl is so simplistic..her shirt...that I love it!! The contrast it makes is great...you seem to be like me...A great pencil drawer and a learning pen/inker. Your doing good at both! Jeroen Admiraal replies: "Thank you! " | |
| 27 Jun 2004 | Katie | Loading...Hey, just one things bugs me about this. The archer on the left seems like he should be looking more in the direction of the girl, or else he'd notice the guy and look a little more worried than that. Jeroen Admiraal replies: "hmm. perhaps the dude with the sword in the background should be a little MORE in the background...if you know what I mean " | |
| 17 Jan 2007 | Anonymous | Loading...Ben je nederlands? Echt geweldig zeg.. bijna alles is al gezegd maar ik moet even zeggen dat ik het mooi vind. Vooral de tekst erbij. ^^ | |