|10 Jan 2005|| Cameron Benson|
Well, Amanda, you are quite skilled. I just finished Peregryne's Story, and now I'm starting on Echoes. I'm fairly excited, too. Your characters have depth, even though there wasn't enought time/space to elaborate on it. If P.Story was a full novel (or anything other than internet published), it would have been a lot different. I can see that, because I have the same issues with my writing. Anywho, keep at it. Your skills are apparent, and increase with every piece of work. PEACE!
|12 Jan 2005|| Cameron Benson|
Hmm. At this point, my previous comment shows on the "Comment Edit" page, but not on the main page, itself. Odd. In any case, I just read Echoes. It seems to read almost like a diary. The main points are hit, with some dialogue, but without a lot of elaboration on the specifics. Is this what you were going for? If so, it's very well done. Not what I'd expected - for P.Story or Echoes; they were similar in that respect - but entertaining, nevertheless. Overall, you did a very good job thus far. (I throw in the "thus far" in hopes of motivating future chapters.)
|27 Sep 2005|| Hurricane|
Please, you simply must continue your story about the Peregryne...
|24 Nov 2005|| Brandi Dimitroff|
I love your Echoes of the chosen stories. You have amazing character depth and I love the way you just add enough tidbits about the chosen and stuff for the readers to understand. I can't wait for the rest of the story please keep it up.
|30 Nov 2005|| Blake|
*does Echos of the chosen dance* i love your stories! part four is coming online soon, yes?
|15 Feb 2006|| Kevin M. Thrain|
Hey, I love your Echoes of the Chosen stories! When is the next part coming? I'm dying to read the next part. I was reading your bio and saw You liked Mercedes Lackey's Stories, and I have to say, I love them too. Which is your favourite one? Update soon!
|19 May 2006|| Kilolo|
knock knock knock is any body home there a lot people here that love your EotC series and would love for you to write more and most important one of all is me. Hey, I dont want to sound mean and come off the wrong way. I just really love your stories and i love the untitled ones to. You know it’s a very hard story to think of a title for and i was thinking some thing like "Espoir Invisible" (Unseen Hope) or Peregrine’s Cry (Cri Pérégrin) ( a lot of the stories I write have a different language especially French and Spanish if they sound right) but those don’t sound right, I need 2 give more thought on it, this is way to good of a story, 2 not have a name for it. Well n-e ways you are a very good writer and you should keep up the good work. 
P.S. I was wondering in the beginning of your stories you have body, does that mean that in your later editions she’ll have a mind and soul part too?
|1 Jun 2006|| I_luv_david_arthur_tate|
Woah. Dude, not cool. I need to read the rest. I'm so totally hooked. You're Echoes of the Chosen... wow. I can't believe how amazingly amazing you are. The death day one was cool too, albeit unnerving. You have a beautiful talent. I hope to be able to write as originally and as exceptionally as you. I'm, obviously not speechless, but in awe more than that.
|1 Jun 2006|| Rosalinda|
You my wonderful author, are an extremely great writer. ANd should definitly keep writeing and adding more to your stories!!! I wish I had a name for the unamed story but sadly *pouts prettily* I don't.
|10 Jul 2006|| Anonymous|
Echoes of the Chosen. What can I say? It was just... amazing. I almost cried reading it, just because it was so wonderful. Please, please please please write more. I have to know what happens. Echoes of the Chosen is just... I'm running out of words that mean "great". Thank you so much for gracing Elfwood with your beautiful stories. Also, congratulations on getting Mod's choice. You deserve it.