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Alexis Paige Millan

Alexis Paige Millan

Alexis is a mutated superhuman who enjoys theatre, art, and plotting to take over the world.
 
 
 
Hi. I have posted my art on Elfwood for almost a year now, so I decided it might be time to post some of my stories. I do not have a lot of great experience in fiction writing, nothing published or anything like that, so I would like some feedback. Also, most of my writing has been in the form of plays (East of the Sun West of the Moon, first place regionals, third in the state!) so I would appreciate advice on how to incorporate dialogue and description into a short story. Oh, and the chapters are all quite short, because I have a short attention span.

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18 Mar 200245 Anna Karysheva
The "girl knight" story bears great resemblence to a "knight's tale" movie, but the ending's different, so that's good. I liked the story, it was simple and easy to read, if a little predictable.
18 Mar 2002:-) Charles Davis
I like your stories, Keep writing!
9 Apr 2002:-) Kate S. Appleton
Alright there neighbour! Some nice stuff you have up here. I like your poem "Avalon" - it has beautiful imagery, calm and mystifying. Anyhow, keep writing and come see my stuff!

Cheers love, Moondog
19 Apr 2002:-) Helen Pye
For someone who apparently doesn't write much poetry, what you have is excellent. I think you must be working on the qualtiy, not quantity rule or something.
Great to see though that your writing is as good and as enjoyable as your art.
Brilliant work - and keep writing!
Helen
2 May 2002:-) Matthew Hart Akers
Fun, you know? I like your style, quite the opposite of mine. Real light and playful.
2 Jun 2002:-) Debra Lynn Turpin
You are very talented. I've enjoyed your writing, as well as your art. Your style is light and fun. That's refreshing for me. I'll wander by again some time.
18 Sep 200845 Anon.
I love your style of writing, it’s so smooth and detailed.
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alexispm4

Alexis Paige Millan

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