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Alison Clare Grills

"Succubus (poem)" by Alison Clare Grills

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Originally inspired by the Alice Cooper song 'Poison'. Tweaked a little for presentation here.
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Weaving a web,

Perfume and lipstick

Mystic allure

Used to capture her prey


Stalking men

She is the huntress

Soft beauty outside

Hard heart within


Gaze like ice

Women avoid her

Scared of her stare

One look could kill


She makes her conquest

He is her property

He would give anything

To win her favour


Pleasures beyond

Human imagining

The world outside

Loses all meaning


She is addictive

He is dependent

Feels he can’t live

Without her touch


She looks out

For her next plaything

Sees what she wants

He’s left behind


Drained of his passion

Soul now empty

Memories of bliss

Haunt every moment


Somehow he exists

Barely breathing

Only a shadow

Of who he once was


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20 Mar 2008:-) Jess L Rhapsodos
*First comment dance...again...this time completes it properly.* Again, this reminds me of my bad guy, Vanima, though she never had a man. Maybe this is one of her soldiers.???
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'Succubus (poem)':
 • Created by: :-) Alison Clare Grills
 • Copyright: ©Alison Clare Grills. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Bliss, Hunter, Passion, Succubus
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders...
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