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"Succubus (poem)" by Alison Clare Grills

SciFi/Fantasy text 13 out of 16 by Alison Clare Grills. ←Previous - Next→

Originally inspired by the Alice Cooper song 'Poison'. Tweaked a little for presentation here.

←- She | Through the Looking Glass (poem) -→

Succubus

Weaving a web,

Perfume and lipstick

Mystic allure

Used to capture her prey

Stalking men

She is the huntress

Soft beauty outside

Hard heart within

Gaze like ice

Women avoid her

Scared of her stare

One look could kill

She makes her conquest

He is her property

He would give anything

To win her favour

Pleasures beyond

Human imagining

The world outside

Loses all meaning

She is addictive

He is dependent

Feels he can’t live

Without her touch

She looks out

For her next plaything

Sees what she wants

He’s left behind

Drained of his passion

Soul now empty

Memories of bliss

Haunt every moment

Somehow he exists

Barely breathing

Only a shadow

Of who he once was

Illustration image7.jpg for Succubus (poem)

←- She | Through the Looking Glass (poem) -→

Date	Name	Comment
20 Mar 2008	Jess L Rhapsodos	Loading... First comment dance...again...this time completes it properly. Again, this reminds me of my bad guy, Vanima, though she never had a man. Maybe this is one of her soldiers.???

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