SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by Alison Hanslow

Wow! Can't believe you don't have any comments yet! Well, here goes: Welcome to Elfwood! I've only been here for a short time, so really I probably am not the best welcomer, but we're going to have to make do, eh? And from Australia, eh? I've heard it's beautiful there, though I've never had the opportunity to visit. Still, it'll be nice to read what someone a world away has come up with!

Guess I better go have a look =)

I have just recently finished reading all of your stories, and I just wanted to ask if you realize that your information doesn't match up. In "The Secrets Within" it says Kiara returned when she was three, but in "The Princess Returns" she is four, but you have great potential as a writer. I doubt I could do any better, actually I'm sure of it.

DOES THAT GUY MEAN HE SURE HE COULD DO BETTER OF HE COULDN'T? aND WHEN ARE THESE GOING TO BE EXPANDED.

First off I’ll say you do have talent but there were a couple of things that annoyed me. In "The Secrets Within" you said Kiara is 16 yet if she returned when she was 3 and it’s been 11 years since she returned would that not make her 14? Also Kiara and the rest of the characters seem so perfect, from the stories I’ve read it seems as though Kiara is this all powerful, amazing sorceress without any weaknesses or doubts or flaws. I feel they stories would relate more if she wasn’t so perfect.

I do think you have talent and I enjoyed reading your stories but they strike me as rather juvenile in places, a little too fast paced as well.

Either way keep it up

Alison Hanslow replies: "Thanks for your comment, let me just say I know where you’re coming from. These are nearly 10 years old, so they aren’t all that great, I know that. Fortunately, in my rewritten and un-posted stuff, continuity has been fixed and she no longer has a god complex . "

That’s good to hear then I look forward yo seeing it published