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Jess L Rhapsodos

"A Joyful End.htm" by Jess L Rhapsodos

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This is a poem that came to me while I was in church.  It just randomly popped into my head, so I jotted it down on the back of the program sheet.  It describes the end of the world in the Christian viewpoint, and how the Dove (Jesus) will save us all with a fantasy twist and feel.

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The dove flies soft and swift,

A Joyful End

 

The Dove flies soft and swift,

His small pale wings beating lightly against the air.

Below him circles a strange sight,

A sleepless malice has come from the depths.

The Bird knows what will happen.

A loud voice will sound from the deep,

Declaring ownership of the people of the world.

Drums, beating; an everlasting rhythm will proclaim the coming of death.

 

The Dove sees all this ahead,

And with such bravery He dives toward the earth.

Such size could not defeat the mighty serpent hidden in the smoky mist,

But it did not deter the Savior.

Like an eagle, the small Bird swooped on overhead,

His tiny body a beacon of light in the stretching darkness.

 

He catches a tiny pebble in His claw,

The same a young boy slayed a giant with.

Light surrounds the Dove’s body,

A holy symbol of His Father.

The pebble falls from the Savior’s clutches,

Whistling down into the mist and darkness.

 

A great shriek rips the air as it strikes the serpent,

And the sleepless, circling malice disrupts in its steady path.

The drums falter and then fall silent.

The sun breaks through the serpent’s spell.

Trumpets ring out into the air.

The joyful end has come.

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9 Jul 2009:-) Nathanael Herald Eisner
It’s great to see some Christian fantasy out here! This is a great poem! Yes, The Dove will save us and it will be a most joyful end! But, I can’t say this is very Biblically accurate, though. It is Christian, so very good on that! Most Christians I know out here wouldn’t dare do anything this Christian, so you have guts and I honor that, and so does Jesus!

:-) Jess L Rhapsodos replies: "Yes, I know that it is not even close to the actual story. It was more based on symbolism than an actual acurate recounting of the story, and I know the devil is not slain with a stone, but rather by fire, but it just presents a good image, and it references yet another story.

I enjoy having the guts. Plus, it is just a good poem, but I’m being biased, hehe.

Thank you for reading. This and Imminent Destruction have to be the two favorite poems that I have written."
9 Jul 2009:-) Johnny Williams
Great. Loved it. Like Nathanael said, its great to see Christian writings here. Awesome!

Speaking of which, I submitted a poem that I’m waiting to be published. Its called "Lost and Found". I would really appreciate your take on it when its published. I’ll let you know, OK?

:-) Jess L Rhapsodos replies: "Sure, I’ll come check it out. I check Elfwood pretty frequently, so I’ll read it pretty soon after its up.

Thanks for reading."
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About 'A Joyful End.htm':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Jess L Rhapsodos
 • Copyright: ©Jess L Rhapsodos. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Jesus, Religious, Dove, Dragon, Demon, God
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc
 • Submitted: 2009-07-07 06:03:01
 • Views: 99


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