"What the little elf saw....." by Evangeline ´Sweetfires´ Cheng

Very good! This is one of your best. I like the leaves. But you need a darker pencil yeah....tell me 'bout it...

Oh, yes... perspective and expression. Damn. Never did manage something like this.Prespective, yes. Expression??? Where? *looks suspiciously at her pic*

The lil' elfie-girl. She looks so darn curious.Oh expression there....Ohhhhh

Hey Evangeline. Hmm.. I have not much to say, exept your proportions are slightly off... You're going to need to watch it with your hands.. they're too small really, and your heads are bit too big, otherwise, your attention to detail amazes me, because I can't do that type of view for beans. (Eeeehh!) Go out someday and go people-watch, pay attention to their proportions, such as, how big their hands are to their faces. (Girls have hands to where the middle finger reaches the middle of their forehead, Guys have hands about the size of their face.. ) Or how big their head is.. I did this for a little bit and it helped. Otherwise, I can see that you have a lot of potential, and I hope you carry your talent further. Have fun -'Yoshi'Hey there! Yeah, that's what our Art History teacher mentioned when we were doing Renaissance study...Yeah, again, it's more 'bout thinking about what you're suppose to see when you're up in a tree.