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"Belladonna" by Emma Kathryn

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Little poem I wrote a while ago...came to me while watching Practical Magic...my all time favourite witchy film.
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Belladonna

Emma Kathryn

 

I may appear as human;

A beauty in your eyes,

But what you see before you

Is poison in disguise.

 

Ebony attire,

The long raven hair,

They conceal more forbidden secrets

Than you are aware.

 

“Beautiful woman”

As my name translates,

But dark are my intentions

And make no mistake.

 

I can lure your body into

A deep, peaceful rest,

But push me too far,

I’ll halt the heart in your chest.

 

I swoop down from high

On wings black as night,

They stretch out behind me

As I leave with your life.

 

Try to bind me, restrict me,

Keep me in chains,

But you can’t prevent the venom

From rushing through your veins.

 

I may appear as human;

A beauty in your eyes,

But what you see before you

Is poison in disguise.

 

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23 Aug 200645 Shijun Du
Mmm. Great rhythm. I really want to see Practical Magic...

1 Emma Kathryn replies: "You should definitly see it...it kicks ass...thanks for reading!!!
Lotsaluv, Em"
31 Aug 200645 ~asya~
Hey! That was really gd! X

1 Emma Kathryn replies: "Asya!!! Heyhey!! Thanks for visiting...sorry I never got round to replying to your email...I've been pretty busy and then I had quite a low period where I shut myself away from the world...as you do...anyway, thanks for visiting and looks like we'll be at the same University after all!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!!!
Lotsaluv, Em"
6 Sep 2006:-) Sasha J. McGee
Practical magic, great movie! Except the bit where they stick the pins in the bad guys eyes. Bleugh. Sorry I'm rambling. Love the poem. The rhyme scheme is good, I love it when people personify things. Especially when it's something nasty like poison.

21 Emma Kathryn replies: "Eugh I hate that bit too, it makes me go "eeeeek!" everytime!!
Thank you for stopping by and thank you even more for reading. And don't worry you didn't ramble at all...I liked reading it, made me smile 1
Lotsaluv, Em"
6 Sep 2006:-) Catherine Smith
This is cute, witchy evil cute if that makes sense. Like a ickle witchy child is being told the poem for fun which also teaches her useful things. No Aesop's Fables for that child! Aww she could put her teddy bears to sleep with it! But I'm rambling and I apologise.
I really liked it although 'They conceal more forbidden secrets' seems almost awkward but I have no sense of rhythm so it might just be the way I'm saying it. Always wanted to watch all of practical magic, only seen bits and pieces. Also this is kinda unrelated but I thought of Sally with her Deadly Nightshade and then I remembered that Nightmare before Christmas is being rereleased in 3D as in with glasses in October! Had to let you know cos I just found out! I'll blame the rambling on excitement!

57 Emma Kathryn replies: "Lol, thank you very much. That made me smile.
Sorry I've been a little out of touch lately and sorry that I haven't read your latest yet...I WILL get round to it. I promise...witch's honour ;-)
WOW What is it? On DVD or is it showing somewhere?! WOW!!! All excited now, thanks!!!
Lotsaluv, Em"
17 Oct 2007:-) Désirée Dippenaar
Ooh~ Spooky! I like the repetition of the first stanza at the end again - overall it was a good description and the imagery was great too! Rhyme and rythm are very good~ I liked it ^^

4 Emma Kathryn replies: "Woohoo! Glad you liked!
Lotsaluv, Em"
24 Jan 200845 Dukey
wooow! very well done *clap* *clap* It also reminds me of the movie Bella Mafia

:-) Emma Kathryn replies: "Wow, thanks...never seen the movie, but will check it out sometime! Thank you again
Lotsaluv, Em"
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'Belladonna':
 • Created by: :-) Emma Kathryn
 • Copyright: ©Emma Kathryn. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Beauty, Belladonna, Woman
 • Categories: Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers..., Celtic
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