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Emma Kathryn

"Control" by Emma Kathryn

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I love these characters. The girl, Tytia, is a soldier and the guy, Virgil, is a vigilante so their union is not taken lightly. I've already done another total kick-ass piece with these two. They're great characters.
See this is what happens when I'm exposed to too much Final Fantasy stuff. I got a load of the anime music videos and I think this piece was very anime-influenced. I could see it playing out in my head all computer-generated with Never Let Go (see recommended listening) playing over it. Quite snazzy, I think.
Okay I have a confession to make...I have now officially stolen both Devil May Cry names. I can't help it, I'm crap at coming up with guys names so I'm just...borrowing :-S them from the game. Ah to hell with it...
Recommended Listening: Never Let Go by Josh Groban - great song. Very eerie
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Control

Emma Kathryn McDonald

 

Virgil instantly awoke when he heard the front door slam shut.  He looked around him.  Tytia was gone and the bed was now empty.  He instantly got up, pulling on his jeans and hurrying through to the front room.  He pulled at the front door and found it locked.  In frustration, he slammed his fist against the door and turned to the touch pad locking system which was fitted to the wall.  Virgil tried to remember the code Tytia had used the night before.  God damn it, he didn’t have time for this! 

He ran back into the bedroom where he knew the balcony doors were still open.  Tytia’s apartment was at the edge of the building so he could look down the walkway from her balcony.  There he saw her, walking, still in his loose-hanging, black shirt and her own black lace hotpants.

“Tytia!” Virgil called out, leaning against the railing.  She did not respond and kept walking.  “TYTIA!”  Nothing again.  He looked at the gap between the gap and the walkway then gazed down the drop between the two.  The city was built high above the ground; there was no way he would survive the fall but he needed to get to her.  He glanced down again and watched as she disappeared through a distant door; the door which led to the roof.

Virgil climbed onto the rail, slowly, being careful with his footing but the moment both his feet were firmly planted on the rail a speaker that was fixed to the wall beside him sounded in his ear.

“Please step away from the rail,” the monotonous tin voice ordered him, “nothing is worth taking your life for.”  Virgil rolled his eyes.  He had forgotten that all apartment blocks were programmed with there now due to the high number of jumpers.  Virgil tried to drown out the voice which continued to repeat its recording as he focussed on his aim.  He took a deep breath and took the leap.

He only just made it, grasping the railing tightly then pulling himself over and onto the walkway.  He instantly broke into a run down the long walkway, rushing by the numbered apartments, searching for the door that Tytia had entered.

A few people had heard the jump alert and opened their doors to see the latest poor soul but were quickly shocked when they saw a young man running barefoot down the walkway in only a pair of jeans.  He was of average height with dark blue eyes and silver hair which was blowing wildly about his face.

He reached the door he had been looking for, threw it open and pounded up the stairs.  His head was spinning with questions.  Where was she going?  Why did she lock him in?  What was she up to?  Was it because of last night?  Why was she leaving him?

The run up the stairs seemed like a lifetime and he felt like he was getting nowhere fast but finally he came to the door exiting out onto the roof.  He slammed the door open and came to a skidding halt.

She was directly before him, still walking and nearing the roof’s edge.  Virgil had no idea what Tytia was doing but he was not about to lose her.  He ran across the roof and grabbed her by the arm.

“Tytia!  What the hell are you…”  Virgil stopped as he spun her around to look at him.  There was no expression on her face and her eyes were clouded over with a white mist.  She tried to jerk away from him, her eyebrows beginning to knit in agitation.  He held tighter and tried to find her in those strange eyes.  “Tytia, baby, you have to answer me; what’s happened to you?”  She continued to gaze coldly into the distance and made no sound.  Virgil put his hand up to her face, which was freezing due to the sharp night air, and it was only as he moved his hand under her shoulder length, dark mahogany hair that he found something.

She tried to push him away as he found it.  She was strong but he held her still as he moved her hair back to reveal a micro-chip, about half an inch square and embedded into the back of her neck, blinking out a red pulse.

 “Oh my God,” he muttered before fumbling under her hair until he finally had a grasp on it.

Tytia gasped for air as Virgil ripped the chip away from her flesh.  The mist drained from her widened eyes and they regained their natural emerald hue as her knees weakened and gave way.  Virgil wrapped his arms around her and steadied her trembling body.  He was overcome with relief as she looked at him with those sparkling with those sparkling eyes and spoke his name once more.

“Virgil?” she said in that sweet but quivering voice.  He threw his arms around her and embraced her as he realised that she was safe.  She could feel his heart pounding violently beneath his breast but she had no clue as to what had caused his distress.  All she could remember was darkness.  She felt like she had just awoken from a hellish nightmare.  “What happened?” she asked him with her face buried in his shoulder.

“They were trying to make you jump,” he said told her as he stroked her hair and fought back the tears.  She pulled her head up to look him in the eye.

“What?  How?”  He held up the chip for her to see.  It was a horrible square of metal and plastic with eight metal fangs protruding like spider legs which had been clinging to her neck.

“With this,” he replied.  “A neural-override chip.”

“Oh God,” she gasped, clasping a hand over her mouth.

“They were programming you like one of their machines.”  She lowered the hand from her mouth and looked into his cobalt eyes.

“Did I…Did…Did they make me hurt you?” Tytia stammered.  She was not sure if she wanted to know his answer.  She could not bear to live with herself if she had hurt him.

“Only when I though you were leaving me as a one-night stand,” he said with a quiet but almost pained laugh.

“Oh no, Virgil, I could never, ever, do that to you,” she said, her voice firm but comforting.

“Good,” he sighed as he embraced her again.

“Virgil,” she said, once more into his shoulder.

“What is it, baby?”

“Will you take me back to bed, please?” she asked pleadingly as she stood in her lace hotpants and his shirt.

“Of course,” he said with a smile before putting an arm around her shoulder and leading her back along the roof, glad that she was back in the safety of his arms.

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11 Sep 200545 Asya
This is one of my fav stories...Cant wait to read more!!!

1 Emma Kathryn replies: "Woo hoo! I love it when poeple find favourites...it's so weird hearing people say "ooh this one's my fave" when they're referring to my work! Check out "Warrior's playroom" for more of Virgil and Tytia. Thanks Asya!
Lotsaluv, Em"
2 Oct 200545 Half-Elven Princess
You gotta write more! i like the idea of a love story. except it’s gotta be fantasy or i’ll lose my interest. and not like the fantasy of today but like the future or past. That’s cool. sry i gotta stop ranting. ^.^

3 Emma Kathryn replies: "Hey, don’t worry, rant away, I like listening! Warrior’s Playroom is more from these characters. Thanks for reading! And I’ll do my best not to bore you!
Lotsaluv, Em"
10 Oct 2005:-) Ryan 'Saint' Stringer
Very interesting introduction to these two star-crossed lovers. So we have one guy who can survive a normally lethal fall, and a girl who has a thing for hotpants and a chip-slot in the back of her neck. Innnteresting 2

58 Emma Kathryn replies: "If you think this one's interesting check out Warrior's Playroom where Tytia and Virgil train together and get a little bit sweaty while they're at it...Lol, it's not that bad, honest!
Lotsaluv, Em"
16 Oct 2005:-) Samuel V. R. Joseph
"Virgil instantly awoke when he heard the front door slam shut" -- Heh, I think "awoke instantly" sounds better...

"He instantly got up, pulling on his jeans and hurrying through to the front room" -- Ok, waking up instantly, I can imagine... but getting up instantly? Either this guy moves very fast (very *very* fast) or by "got up" you mean the same thing as "awoke", in which case it's a repitition... and anyway, there's a repitition of "instantly". Personally, I think "quickly got up" works just fine...

"He looked at the gap between the gap and the walkway then gazed down the drop between the two" -- Erm, I'm not too sure what you meant here...

"He had forgotten that all apartment blocks were programmed with there now due to the high number of jumpers" -- I think you meant "these" instead of "there"... this part was pretty cool... though I doubt that it actually works =P

"Only when I though you were leaving me as a one-night stand" -- that should be "thought"...

One thing I didn't quite get... if the fall from their apartment was supposedly "unsurvivable", as Virgil seems to think, why would "they" program Tytia to go all the way to the roof to jump? Why not just get her to jump from the bedroom? It seems much easier...

Anyway, aside from that, this was pretty cool, in an understated-futuristic kinda way... Have you written any more about these characters? Oh, and please feel free to drop by my shelf for a visit sometime! =)

16 Emma Kathryn replies: "You caught me!!! Sorry there are a lot of typos in this one...I probably typed it up late at night. Ooops, but thanks for pointing them out. The gap thing is supposed to be: "between the balcony and the walkway" - yet another typo...the jumper alert really wouldn't work, it's one of those Government "yeah, let's just do something about it and pretend we care" things. And as for the guys trying to make Tytia jump - they REALLY wanted rid of her >1 Evil prats!!!
Anyway thanks for reading and for your help. The other piece that features Virgil and Tytia is Warrior's Playroom...it's erm...a little steamy...erm...I was missing my boyfriend at the time...erm....
Lotsaluv, Em"
1 Oct 2006:-) Musty Zein
Do you like Devil may cry? If so please tell me its because of the awesome gameplay and gothicness and not because Dante is fit...Anyways Virgil reminded me of Dante what with the silver hair and all...oh and nice story too 10

29 Emma Kathryn replies: "No I'm not a Dante fan-girl...I suppose it is the gothicism that attracts me but I fell in love with all Devil May Cry3 and that's what inspired this...and yes I stole the names...so sue me Capcom...
but I'm still struggling my way through the first DMC cause I'm not exactly a top-notch gamer...although I do love GuildWars...
sorry I rabbled so much in this reply :-S
Lotsaluv, Em"
4 Oct 200645 Andy Bain
I thought this was good too. It was interesting, although there was no fighting!

58 Emma Kathryn replies: "Awww, sorry! Well am currently writing two more Tytia/Virgil pieces...the first time the meet (involving crazy motorbike chase!) and a Tytia training session involving why you shouldn't try to customise firearms.
Thanks for reading!
Lotsaluv, Em"
19 Aug 2007:-) Robin Hersom
Interesting. The relationship between the two is very well portrayed, with the devotion (Virgil risking his life etc) very nicely done. Quite dark, with the 'neural override chip' thing, I'm interested as to whom 'they' are. The Academy? Some hitherto unknown enemy? Write more!

22 Emma Kathryn replies: "Oooooh, wrote this such a long time ago!!!
Glad you liked it, feeling quite inspired to write some more now so thank you!
Lotsaluv, Em"
8 Jan 2008:-) Stephanie Rennolds
*darts off to read more*

Gorgeous!

2 Emma Kathryn replies: "Thank you again! You are too kind!
Lotsaluv, Em"
1 Jul 2010:-) Lena V. Bazhenova
Nice story! I wonder if this is a continuation of something, or if there is a continuation of this in which the characters are better introduced. Overall I liked it =)
So who are ’they,’ exactly, and why did they want the girl to die? Very intriguing.
There are a couple of typos that I saw:
1) Repeating phrase: "He was overcome with relief as she looked at him with those sparkling with those sparkling eyes and spoke his name once more."
2)’realised’ should be spelled ’realized’
3)“They were trying to make you jump,” he said told her...
The ’said’ is not needed here.

:-) Emma Kathryn replies: "Hey! Thank you very much for reading! There’s another story in this series on my page called "Warrior’s Playroom", which you might want to read next. Thanks for the tips, I’ll fix them as soon as I can.

Lotsaluv, Em"
4 Jul 2010:-) Lena V. Bazhenova
Okay, I’ll be sure to take a look at that other story =)
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'Control':
 • Created by: :-) Emma Kathryn
 • Copyright: ©Emma Kathryn. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Relationship, Soldier/vigilante
 • Categories: Romance, Emotion, Love, Techno, Cyber, Technological
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