| 15 Aug 2004 |  Ashley R. Wynn | Ooooh... I like the little spy girls!  I just love speculative fiction, and the 'history lessons' make your piece better. The only thing that bothered me was that sometimes it was difficult to tell which character's point of view the story was in. Each transition from character character was easy to identify, but which character was 'speaking' was hard to identify. Keep up the good work!   An Nhu Le replies: "tanx~ i really needed that. you see...i was in a freaking dilemma about either continuing or discontinuing the story...your comment might have sparked the interest in my story back again...and a few more ^_____^" | |
| 3 Sep 2004 |  Joy L. Richmond | Discontinuing the story? uh, please no? I'm probably acting a little selfishly here but I'd hate to see you stop writing it. I really like it! I'll keep checking back just in case you decide to write more ;-) *fingers crossed* | |
| 5 Jan 2005 | Miguel Francis Ettema | The rest of Rarest's Child is up... all of it!  | |
