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Ana Maria Salinas Norbakk

"The Garland" by Ana Maria Salinas Norbakk

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This poem is actually a mourning song, sung by a elven lady as she waits for her knight that died on the battlefield
I also made a dawing to this poem...check out my gallery to see it.
The Garland
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The leaves they fall

as I gaze to the west.

In my hand a garland

for you my love.

The day it withers

and dark takes its place.

where are you?

where is my knight?

 

Where are all the warriors?

In unmarked graves.

Who will then mourn them?

No tears are shed.

Swords and spears are on the ground

of blood they're tinted red,

and so pale you visage,

my love.

 

I woed I'd wait for you,

the sun did shine.

Over our love that was so strong.

But now the dark has caught me

and drawn you away.

And all I have is this garland,

for you.

 

Night is dark and night is cold

as I think of your touch.

Of the last caress

that your lips gave.

Of the smile, that fatal day,

you gave as a farwell

and I dared not speak

of my love.

 

Where are all the warriors?

In unmarked graves.

Who will then mourn them?

No tears are shed.

Swords and spears are on the ground

of blood they're red

and so pale you visage

love.

 

Of ice it is,

you visage,

my love.

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14 Jul 2005:-) Jacquelyn Dunlap
So beautifully sad. I like the way you repeated that one part, it really made it stand out. So sad... *sniffle*
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'The Garland':
 • Created by: :-) Ana Maria Salinas Norbakk
 • Copyright: ©Ana Maria Salinas Norbakk. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Battle, Knight, Longing, Loss, Mourning, Sadness, Song, Sword
 • Categories: Elf / Elves, Romance, Emotion, Love, Warrior, Fighter, Mercenary, Knights, Paladins
 • Views: 460

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