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Ana Maria Salinas Norbakk

"The waterfall" by Ana Maria Salinas Norbakk

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A voluntary sacrifice to the waterfalls.
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The waterfall

 

As I float I feel him calling from a far.

“Come to me” he sings in my ear.

I wonder what would happen if I did.

Would he drown me?

Would he save me?

 

Feeling myself let go,

I slowly follow his calling.

Lifting me softly,

he carries me.

I feel his pulse in my own heart.

 

Small waves they greet me,

as I see the shore go by,

leaving behind all my cares and fears.

He lifts easily.

He guides me.

 

I her him calling closer now.

Kissing my flesh as he carries me.

In fear I close my eyes.

Feel him roaring in the distance.

I know I will soon be there.

 

As I open my eyes,

the sky rushes by far above me,

the clouds seem to wave me good bye.

His voice now is a loud roar.

I close my eyes for the last time.

 

In my ears I hear him roaring loudly,

“Come freely and I will do no harm.”

The waters carries me toward him.

As they let me fall I open my eyes.

“I can fly!”

“I am free!”

 

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17 Nov 200345 AJ 'Roguehammer' Williams
Great job on this one. You've got some latenet talent somewhere in there. I like how you didn't reveal who 'he' was.
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'The waterfall':
 • Created by: :-) Ana Maria Salinas Norbakk
 • Copyright: ©Ana Maria Salinas Norbakk. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Death, Sacrifice, Suicide, Waterfall
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Celtic
 • Views: 672

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