| 11 Aug 2006 | Victoria Bellamy | Hi! Welcome to Wyverns! I really love your stories and think you have made a really good start to your library! I would love it if your could give me some constructive criticism on my site! I really love your stories and think you should never stop writing!  Thanks id be happy to when i have time school just started. | |
| 31 Aug 2006 | Victoria Bellamy | Hi! I have just put a poem on a ticket and it should be out in a couple of days! I would love to see what you thought when it comes out! See you!  | |
| 14 Sep 2006 | Victoria Bellamy | Updates! Poems! | |
| 14 Dec 2006 | Peter Boklund | I'm an idiot! They are right in the middle of the webpage! Don't worry, I could still make people think I'm smart. | |
| 14 Dec 2006 | Peter Boklund | I just wanted to say hi mi amigo! Looks like a pretty cool site. I'll try reading some of you stuff. All I have to do is find where they are! | |
| 15 Dec 2006 | Brittany Bailey | I didnt know you liked to write storys mucho kudos my friend | |
| 30 Oct 2007 | The Sharp Wife | Hey, I read through your stuff, and I think you do have a nice strong plot. It'll make a good book as long as you keep it going and fill in the history with some awesome battles and sub-stories. Your writing style is also good- my favorite was the story of Peteran because your detail was great and you really helped the reader connect with the mind of Peteran himself. Minor criticism- I can't help comparing Nordert with Voldermort (Harry Potter) because the characters and stories sound similar. Don't worry though, as long as you develop Nordert well enough, I'm sure he'll become different enough to stand on his own. Other than that, like I said, you've got a good start with lots of potential.  | |