"Evilties" by Ashleigh G. Wiles

You used chalks right? Maybe try some different techniques and practice blending a bit before you start each new pic. It'll help, believe me. I have these really cool chalks that my grandma gave me that I use when I do something really colorful [which is hardly ever so maybe I'm the only one that needs practice with colors]. Oh! Hair spray will freaze the color so use it after each color so you don't smear it doing another (unless you're blending, then just be careful!) and when you're done to prevent fingerprints and stuff (my friends are so rude, always getting finger prints on my stuff). Anyway, beautiful drawing, I like the idea and the composition.

Spacy (for a reason)

This is a great pic, wonderful storylines too. I love Majoras Mask, and im gonna be makin some LOZ books ( hope they do well) I would name her somethin like Renay or Arian. good job!