| Date | Name | Comment | | | 17 Sep 2008 |  Tony Orzech |  Loading...Well done Asja! Good concept, good pose, good composition and nice shading. Keep studying that anatomy, you are getting better ;-). The weak area is the abdominal muscle area. Your sketch looked better, but the shading seems to create an odd shape to the muscle area. Let me know if you would like me to show you what I’m talking about  . A nice job that shows improvement Asja!  Asja Ilonka Keeman replies: "Thank you Tony, that means a lot to me specially hearing it from you.
Of course its all right to do that. I would like to improve this drawing, I already changed his rib position, but still the shadows are bothering me a bit. I’m looking forward to your mail. I always like to improve and keep studying. " | |
| 27 Sep 2008 |  John R Farley Jr | Loading... Okay, I see what you have done with the rib cage, they seem to stand out a bit more. Don’t make it too much or he’ll look like he hasn’t had anything to eat for a long time.  Asja Ilonka Keeman replies: "Hha no this is what it will look like, I only going to change is abdomen the next time and that will be it. I had another drawing in the moderator que but the rejected it. I’m going to look into it how I can get it on Elfwood. Want to show it so badly!" | |
| 28 Sep 2008 |  Gee eM Bee | Loading... Ik zie verbetering, Goed gedaan  .,, Asja Ilonka Keeman replies: "Bedankt, vind het altijd moeilijk om in tekeningen veranderingen in te brengen als ze al af zijn. Nu alleen zijn buik nog een beetje veranderen. Heb ondertussen al een andere tekening af, alleen die was gewijgerd. verkeerde gatagorie in gevoegd, dus even opnieuw en dan weer een ticket insturen. Hopelijk nu met de goede catagorie. Ben nu ook een schets aan het uitwerke. Moet eigenlijk school werk doen, maar ben beetje brak van een concert gister avond." | |
| 28 Sep 2008 | Gee eM Bee | Loading... Ja ik weet hoe het is, moet eigelijk een boek lezen voor school maar ik heb erg gewoon geen zin in  , Naar welk concert ben je geweest?.,, Asja Ilonka Keeman replies: " vervelend he? `Rock concert "The Blackout" support. echt heel gaaf lekker mee lopen springen, zingens en douwen ahahha.." | |
| 28 Sep 2008 | Gee eM Bee | Loading... Hahaha goed meegezongen zei je? Ik wed dat jij morgen je stem kwijt bent .,, Asja Ilonka Keeman replies: "Ben ik nou al behoorlijk ahahahah en spierpijn jo!" | |
| 25 Oct 2008 |  Monica LeFay | Loading... Oo, I love it! great pose and I love the smoke... Somethings a bit odd about the stomach though, but everything else is great=) I’ve had a peek at some of your other work as well, but I have to say that this one is my favourite so far=) **Skips off to look at the rest of the gallery** Asja Ilonka Keeman replies: "Yeah the pose works very well with the concept doesn’t it?
about the stomach, your right I’m redoing him bit by bit, because of the little time I have to draw right now. But you will see a better version of him soon. Glad you have a favorite here! thats really great to hear. Thanks for going trough my gallery, hope your coming back to see the updates when there in. Thank you very much! " | |
| 10 Nov 2008 |  Shelz Keast | Loading... | |
| 26 Nov 2008 |  Vilhelmina Ullemar | Loading... Very powerful composition, and great use of pencil! You’ve made this picture look so ’complete’ somehow, which is something I have a slight difficulty achieving in my own pencil work. There’s a point when pencils look like sketches and one when they look like a finished polished piece - and this is definitely a case of the polished variety! Asja Ilonka Keeman replies: "Pencile can be very hard to handle indeed. Mostly it looks like you didn’t dare to draw, because it looks unfinished ore (like you said, sketchy) But when you try do really do pencil. You can do wonderful and powerful things. That is what I learned. So far now, I think you have noticed that my shading are much heavier and powerful than half year ago. So I say it to you to, If you going to draw with pencil’s again (please do so!) Don’t be afraid " | |
| 23 Aug 2009 |  Amanda Nordstrand | Loading... wow ! you are realy good ! i can imagine that it tock you sow long ! the clouds are very good made and his body looks very real! Asja Ilonka Keeman replies: "Thank you, the clouds indeed I was really sick of it when I finished that part. But it looks quit good and it fits the concept very well so, I’m glad I pulled trough with that. Thanks for the lovely comment!" | |
| 17 Sep 2009 |  James Edward Vance | Loading... I really like this one. The pose is strikeing and the emotions it envokes just puts me in aw. LOl I love your god types. lol Asja Ilonka Keeman replies: "Thank you James for liking my work so much!" | |
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