|11 Mar 2003|| Sparrow kawaiicuno@hot...com>|
You've improved a bit since I've last seen your work. But.. the inking on this piece looks rather rushed, and it gives it a messy look. Also, her left cheek looks odd, maybe you should lower it a bit. And her left hand looks rubbery and akward, as if there's no bone structure beneath it. It looks as if it was based more off of a referance picture than it was sketched out using shapes to determine bone structure and such. Eh, I'm no expert, but that's what I see. Azadia Touka
replies: "Excuse me, Ms Critic, for having posted an old image that was a sad excuse of a scan. My scanner does not like scanning anything, nowadays.As for "bone structure" and such, it really annoyed me how people insist the "only" way to draw is with shapes, I've never used them, you know that, so don't whine over it. -.-;"
|21 Mar 2003|| Howard faria|
Anime is NOT about perfect anatomy! How could it be? I love this! I think it's perfect!