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"Lost Nation - Escalation I" by Antony Bailey

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Lost Nation - Escalation I

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Light spilled from the tome turning the room an emerald green. The texture of the pages forming lines, twisting and contorting into words and sentences. Once again he sat to chronicle the foretold. Night after night he watched events appear in writing, decoding the ancient languages and riddles in hope of being one step ahead of the game.

His name is Simon Maple, a scribe in the service of ‘The Order of the Shield’. It is his duty is to read through the many tomes, the countless news articles and reports, to find signs of intrusion into our world.

It is important to understand that the mortal realm is under constant infiltration by forces that most of us would find difficult to comprehend. Powerful demons, creatures of a hellish netherworld, push through into the weak minded and the corrupt. Once in our world they sow deceit and distrust, forming cults of worship to bring forth more of their kind.

In ancient times great warriors from the skies scoured our world of these creatures, they fought upon the great plains and much legend was told of their battles. In recent times the warriors have disappeared, leaving the fledgling race of mankind to fend for itself.

Since the disappearance of these warriors, those who know the existence of the demonic hold a constant vigil against the darkness, recruiting those who have special ‘talents’ to help their cause.
Mystics, warriors and scribes, those of great faith battle the demons together. This goes on behind the scenes, a thankless existence which they endure to keep our world safe.

Simon scanned through the words twisting within the pages, his quill taking them down and decoding them, his ‘talent’ allowed him to read and translate the ancient languages at phenomenal speeds.
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His usually expressionless face began to show signs of fear. The usually cryptic symbols warping within the pages turned to clear images cast into the air above the tome. Scenes of devastation filled his vision, the pages showing him in glorious colour the events of days to come.

Fires burn as mankind turns on itself, a great city lying in ruin and the dead walking the land. A powerful master of evil rises from their world and turns the sky black, warping the landscape to his very whim. Then the view is blocked by a great storm, the images fade to darkness and the light of the scriptures dies out. This was the legend of the Dark Messiah, the reason he had been given the most powerful of the scriptures, the destiny scrolls. He has to warn the others of his order.

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He ran, with a prayer on his lips that he’d misread these images. There was no time to clarify, now he needs to get back to the others, to plan the days to come, the very survival of mankind is at stake. Gripping the scriptures tightly in his arms, Simon ventured out of his flat into the dark London streets. He tried to ring the others in his order on his mobile, frantically dialling the number. There was no signal, no way to get a message through.

“Calm down Simon” he said to himself, “there is still time, we are still one step ahead.”

He wasn’t convinced.

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As he made his way down the city streets he could feel a presence following. Daring to look behind Simon saw the silhouettes of three large men. He remembered the teachings of his master, that he was never to take the tomes outside of his abode.

“They great enemy can sense magics like a shark can smell blood.” his master used to say, “To take the scriptures outside without the proper rites being intoned is very dangerous indeed.”

As he was carrying the most powerful of the scriptures it was obvious who his pursuers were.
He broke into a run once more. The station was not far now, maybe he could lose them there.
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By Antony Bailey and Adam Gomm

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16 Apr 2006:-) Laura de Lange
Oh, I just saw your highly descriptive description.
*Rolls eyes at Antony*

1 Antony Bailey replies: "After submitting this 3 or 4 times i got a bit sick of writing out the description. Turns out i had to say that the pictures are used with permission (which they are, by the way, courtesy of Adam Gomm)"
16 Apr 2006:-) Laura de Lange
He he, I love the illustrations! I found the beginning a bit weak and the whole thing lacks something. It's hard to imagine what I am being told. Maybe more description would add information and create and atmosphere. Also, Simon seemed very panicky and I would expect him to run out of his apartment, at least until he had controlled himself. Ja, I don't really know what to say. Let's just say I am not yet convinced of your story. Maybe try to apply the advice better writers than me passed on to me: Try to show the reader what is happening and try not to tell them. But I liked the idea of the events in the prophesy creating pictures above his table. That was a really neat idea.

Oh yes, nearly forgot.
*Does stately first comment waltz. The effect is marred by the absence of a ball gown, and, for that matter, the absence of any music. Still, at least Laura danced for you.

:-) Antony Bailey replies: "Hi laura, your comments are quite constructive and i thank you for that. As this was my first venture into creative writing i expected a few things to be wrong. hopefully my writing will improve over the next 5 installments. As for your issues with the narrative, you'll see that simon isn't quite as panicky as he appears later on. I'm glad you like the illustrations, they are being penned and coloured in Flash at the moment and i hope to have new ones up soon."
27 Apr 2006:-) Annie Harrington
I think the illustrations moved the story right along. I rather liked your writing style here myself, though there were a few plot points I missed. So why exactly did Simon have to carry out the sacred magic scrolls out of his abode, if it was so dangerous to do so? Surely his friends/fellow protectors would have believed him if he said there was danger that needed to be taken care of? Anyway. . . I think I'll see your next chapter.

:-) Antony Bailey replies: "Thanks for the comment, Hopefully i'll find time soon to put the rest of the stories up and finish the artwork."
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'Lost Nation - Escalation I':
 • Created by: :-) Antony Bailey
 • Copyright: ©Antony Bailey. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Escalation, Escape, Fantasy, Lost, Modern, Nation
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Urban Fantasy and/or Cyberpunk
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