"Queen Marriah" by Lauren A. Banks

Yaahhaaa!!! Im bacckkkk!! She certanly looks evil. Like the others, i like the expression!LOL. The more I look at her, the more she reminds me of Mr. Burns from the Simpsons going, "Excellent." ^^ Heh, well thanks for your comment!

he he I like the look of evil thoughts plastered upon her lionic visage. And what an adorably cute crown. lol I like her..she definately looks evill...and yes..stark raving mad!!!LOL. Don't tell her her crown is cute! ...Actually, do! She looks really funny when she's mad. Well, she's always mad, so angry. Yes, angry. >^_^

wow, she looks so....stealthy. Like shes sneaking up on her prey, the confidence of the cat who KNOWS the kill is hers...o_O Wonderfully put! Yay! Now I can replace the mental picture of Mr. Burns going "Excellent" with your description. Thanks! ^^

An extension on mah last post, b4 i was an actual member of elfwood *wink, wink* Unfortunately, I made a VERY stupid mistake and accidentally put a password on her comp, and now it is inaccessable since she, being the idiot she is, can't remember it... just mah luck... *kicks Erin's comp* She is still cool. She'd get along with Kirda nicely... And here i go again off subject. Oh well. SHE IS THE COOLEST OF EM ALL! Just so i got something on the piccy in this post... lol. Anyway, visit mah site *Hint hint, nudge nudge* on elfwood, lauren. Fix the password thing, I can't get to your page! *Cries* Heh, well, thankees for commenting!

Hey, let me know when your story is done. I'd lovelovelovelovelove to read part of it. It already sounds good, and I love that quote! I need ppl to critique my own work, maybe we could do a trade of writing?Well, the skeletal frame of the story is some what formed. Right now I'm in the proccess of fleshing out the characters. I don't know how long it will be before the actual story is done. ^^ I'm also putting together my comic, Double Helix, and my Vietnam war story, and that's taking a bit of research. ^^ Hmmm, a writing trade!?! How does that work? Sounds cool though. I also really want to see your stories! they're so full of life and imagination. Anywho, thanks for the comment! ^_^

Mm, her face maybe looks a bit severe, grim even though you may have wanted that. I like her hands though a lot. Just looks like she's toying with something, going "hm, hm! hmm" with that evil grin. LOL. It still reminds me of the Simpson's Mr. Burn's going "Exceeellleeent". Kinda annoing in a way. ^_^

She does look a little crazy, doesn't she. But if you think Queen Marriah is stark mad, wait until you hear about my character, Babavinchi. And no, she isn't related to Leonardo DeVinchi (Can't spell his name). Baba is also a bit crazy and is basically a witch and a used-to-be shapeshifter. She's on the good side, though (phew!). She and her farmhand/pet, Tito, provide the comic relief in the story. Here she is talking to a guard in the story as she tries to help my main character escape from the clutches of evil.

Guard:"What did you say?"
Baba:"I-I forgot to put in my tampon, I'll be right back."LOL. Yup, that'd definitely distract the guard! Heh, Baba has quite a name! Lucky for you that she is one the good side though. Marriah's been threatening to have me beheaded for neglecting to draw her recently. Yeesh! Insane, evil ladies are so hard to please.

Do you remember the Robin Hood cartoon that stared animals? That's what it reminds me of. But it's really good. Her hands are all like, "Ooh, I'm going to get you with my evil plan. Mwahaha...." I don't often post comments, but this really caught my eye. ^_^LOL, personally, she reminds me of Mr. Burns going, "excellent", but glad you like her. ^^

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