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"untitled" by Holly ´bat baby´ Davidson

SciFi/Fantasy text 28 out of 31 by Holly ´bat baby´ Davidson. ←Previous - Next→

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The wind she blows

And blows

And blows

The Spiders Crawl

Between my
Toes

I dance and jaunt

Into the wood

I would stir magic

If I could

Date	Name	Comment
29 Aug 2003	Alice Muffin Girl Smith	Loading... ...I didn't get a sense of anything resembling grief in this. Sorry. PS: contemplates doing a second comment dance, then realizes she's supposed to be in a typo-induced coma falls into coma of the second comment instead Holly 'bat baby' Davidson replies: "blinks...runs and checks story...blinks again AAAAHHHHH I HAVE PLACED THE WRONG TITTLE WITH THIS STORY!!! dies"
29 Aug 2003	E. Hanna	Loading... I like it. The perfect mix of melancholy and happiness. I wrote one or two poems like this in the margins of some notebook. Sometimes you don't need length to get the point across. It's one of the signs of being a good writer in my opinion. Holly 'bat baby' Davidson replies: "thank you"
5 Sep 2003	Camilla 'Motone' Whitney	Loading... haha... wrong title.. that ain't no good ^_^ But it's a cool poem ^_^
2 May 2007	Samantha L. Papworth	Loading... Short and sweet!
23 Dec 2008	Anon.	Loading... neat. i’ve never read anthing like this poem!
1 Jan 2009	Sarah Whitney Little	Loading... same thing as samantha. short and sweet. mine r all long. i like seeing some short poems around.