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Brittany Ann Zayas

"Deep Ones (Chapters 1--4)" by Brittany Ann Zayas

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The first four chapters of a short story focusing on the pasts and origins of the main characters from 'The Great Ones' the last story from a series entitled 'The Deep Ones'. A bunch of teenage fantasy creatures. The basic plotline of the series was inspired by a dream. It's a bit stereotypical but that is completely intentional, so don't bug me about it.
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Chapter 1: Graverobbers
Paul Haring had worked at the cemetery on Van Sicklen Street for fifty years, so nothing was really new to him. That is except for new graves, but almost all graves were the same. He was used to the youths outside the gates at midnight, daring one another to trespass, and he was used to the brave kids who walked boldly down the rows of graves, and the kids who screamed because they thought they heard a noise or saw a ghost. He was used to the grieving visitors, and their asking where such-and-such a person’s grave was. He was used to the ones who sat and spoke to the occupant of a grave for hours on end, or the ones who stood there solemnly, or those who placed down flowers and wept.

It got boring after a while. When Paul was a boy, he used to dare or be dared to go into the cemetery, and he had been terrified. But it had been a fun terror, a thrilling terror, like a good murder story. Now it was boring, like any old job. Paul remembered when, as a teenager, he had gotten a job in the old Tub’o’Burgers restaurant. At first, it had been fun to get burgers whenever he liked, but after a year, it became boring and he got sick of burgers. Even now, over fifty years later, Paul did not eat burgers.

This night, Paul strolled boredly through the graveyard, barely listening to the mingled sounds of scared yelps, boys’ muffled laughter, weeping, soft talking, and the wind.

“Hey! Hey, old man!”

The stage whisper caught Paul’s attention, and he spun around quickly. Two men were standing outside the gate. Paul came closer.
The taller one wore a black cowboy hat, a corduroy jacket, and jeans. He was younger than Paul by about thirty years. His companion was bald, wore a leather jacket, dirty jeans, and biker boots. But what Paul found most unnerving about this man (who was a few years younger than the other), was the tattoo under his right eye–a teardrop.

Paul was sure he had heard that a teardrop tattoo means you have killed someone. “What do you want?” he asked, his voice shaking.

“Open the gates. We want to make a deal,” said the tall man, the one who had spoken earlier. He had an accent; Paul was sure it was Texan.

Paul opened the gate and let them in. “Not from around here, are you?”

“Nah,” said the Texan. “Just visiting.”

His friend looked around the graveyard, adjusting the strap of the big bag on his shoulder. Paul heard something heavy and metal clunk against something else heavy and metal.

“Look,” said the Texan. “Take this.” He stuffed something into Paul’s hand.

The old man looked down at his hand and the hundred dollar bill there. He opened his mouth to speak.

“More?” The Texan handed him two other hundred dollar bills.

“What is all this for?” Paul asked.

“We want a favor, old man. You bring us to a grave, walk away, and allow us to take the body.”

“Grave-robbers,” Paul breathed. He had heard of those before, but not on Van Sicklen!

“Yes,” said the Texan. “It’s no harm done. Who’s going to know? We’ll take the body, close up the coffin, fill up the grave again, and no one will ever know.”

“This is wrong,” said Paul. “Just wrong.”

The Texan snorted. “What use is the body to you? You wouldn’t lose anything. You gain.”

Paul looked down at the money. He could use this. He was low on money lately...“Fine. Take what you need. But only one.”

“Of course,” the Texan said. “Which is the newest grave? We want a fresh body. Preferably a young body too. Not an old person.”

“We have just the thing,” Paul said, stuffing the bills into his pocket and beckoning the men to follow him. He was leading them down a row of rather large conspicuous grave markers, when the Texan stopped. Paul turned around, and saw the Texan staring at one of the gravemarkers.

It was a two-foot column with an angel perched on it, and holding a sword. Its wings were bigger than the Texan’s hand. The Texan knelt down to read what was written on the column. “The one you wanted to show us, old man–How old is the corpse?”

“He died at forty-three,” Paul replied promptly.

“This one should be better,” the Texan said. “Only two days dead. Brat died at fifteen years old. Did you know him?”

“Yes,” Paul said, and the memory of the funeral–only held that morning–came back to him. The boy’s parents had been there, doing their part. The mother sobbed uncontrollably and the father put his arm around her sympathetically. Everybody talked about what a good boy he had been...but Paul knew that this boy had been a troublemaker. He used to walk around the graveyard when he was younger, and Paul remembered him lying down in the dirt and saying: “Right here. I want the grave to be right here.” Except every time he came, he had chosen a different spot.

Paul remembered seeing Kitty Brauk there with that boyfriend of hers, that photographer from New York. They had been great friends of the dead boy. They had stayed at the grave after the others left. The photographer took photos of the grave, which Paul found to be creepy. Rumor had it that the photographer had even taken pictures of the corpse at the wake, but had been stopped after he had only taken two or three. However, he had refused to give up his camera and had stowed it in that creepy briefcase of his, the case with seven locks.

Paul blinked, and focused his bleary eyes on the Texan. “Did you say something?”

“I said that we’re taking this one. We’ll take him.”

“Fine.”

The Texan nodded at his friend, who reached into his big bag and took out two shovels. The two men set to digging. An hour later they had unearthed the coffin, and pried it open. Paul came at that moment, and stepped back in disgust.

The Texan grinned brightly. “Good corpse. Come on, pal,” he said to his friend, “pull him out.”

His friend grunted in response, and pulled out the corpse. The dead boy’s skin was white with a strange greyish tint. The Texan nodded approvingly, and unrolled a body bag, where they put in the body.

They were about to zip it closed, when Paul stepped forward, and peered at the corpse. “Good-bye, Andrei,” he murmured, as the zipper came up and hid the boy’s face from view.

Chapter 2: The Deep Ones
He breathed and his scrawny chest rose and fell. He felt a rush over his entire body, and he shuddered, as feeling returned to his body. He felt something heavy and warm on top of him, and something warm and wet...He sat up and shoved the dead man off of him.
Where was he? He swung his legs down from the white table he had been lying on, and stood there shakily. He looked down at the red blood smeared all over his bare chest, which was an odd greyish-white color. All he was wearing was a pair of worn, blood-stained pants. He looked around the small white room, then at the dead man, who was dressed in a suit. The dead man had been slashed across the stomach...

The one who had awoken tried to remember how he had gotten here, but the only information he brought up was I am fifteen. I am fifteen...

He looked around the room in search for a mirror, because he could not recall how he looked. It was then that the door burst open and a girl dashed in, locking the door behind her.

He jumped back in fright; the girl was frightening-looking. Her skin was almost a pale green-grey, and her eyes were huge. One eye was blue, the other a startling violet. Her shoulder-length hair was a dark green color, longish and scraggly, like seaweed. She wore a ragged blanket draped over her body, rather like a toga. Her greenish legs and arms were visible. On her body were stitches. Like stitched-up cuts, but there was no blood. The boy thought vaguely that she wasn’t quite ugly; if she hadn’t been such a nasty color, she would have been rather pretty.

The girl looked him up and down, then her mismatched eyes flitted to the man in the suit’s corpse. “Did you kill him?” she asked, her voice bearing a hint of a Southern drawl.

“No,” the boy said immediately, his voice coming out as a rasp. His hand flew to his throat.

“One of them must have come in here then and done him in,” she said, shrugging. “Why didn’t he kill you?”

“I wasn’t conscious,” he said, glancing at the table where he had lain previously. “I think I was sleeping.”

“I was too, but this man came up to my cage and opened it. So as soon as the door came open I knocked him down and made a run for it. Too bad there’s no window in here to escape out of–”

“How can you consider popping out into civilization like that?” he snorted. “You look like something out of a horror movie.”

“Have you looked in the mirror lately?” she asked. “You look like a corpse.”

He frowned. “Who are you?”

“What am I, would be a better question. I was created out of dismembered corpses and other scientific means by the Frankenstein Company. The Company was founded by Victor Frankenstein, who was creating an army to take over the world.”

“Not very original,” he said.

“No, not really. But the mission failed, Frankenstein was terminated, as were his workers, and all of the Frankenstein soldiers–that is except for me. I don’t know why they didn’t kill me, but my brothers and sisters died miserable deaths at the hands of the law. I was cryo-ed.”

“Eh?”

The girl stamped her foot impatiently. “I was put in a cryogenic chamber. Now, I don’t know what year it is now, but it’s probably been over a year since then. I was pulled out of my cryo chamber, and they put me in this filthy cage, feeding me this disgusting moldy bread and water. Now I think somebody’s come and invaded this place. And from somebody who’s seen this kind of thing happen before, you should believe: they’ll kill us if they find us.”

“Why?”

“If the project is illegal, not only the creators will be punished, but the creations.”

The boy turned away, looking for some way to escape. “There’s a vent,” he said.

The girl snorted. “A vent? Everybody goes through the vents.”

“Originality should not be an issue if we’re about to die.”

“I’m made up of pieces of dead people, and you, by the looks of it, are dead.”

The boy glared at her. “Would you stop concerning yourself with technicalities? First you scare me half to death–” The girl smirked at the use of that word “–with your prattle about us being killed, then you say we’re already dead, so it doesn’t matter anymore–”

“Stop your shouting,” she interrupted. “Give me a boost up.”

“I don’t think so,” he said. “I’m not strong enough.”

“I don’t weigh much.”

“Still.” The boy stretched out his scrawny arms. “Not much more than skin and bone here.”

The girl huffed. “Fine. I can’t give you a boost.”

“The vent is covered anyway, and nailed shut,” he murmured.

“That’s great. Just great.”

“Hold on...” The boy bent then jumped up.

“Hey–hey! You’re sticking to the wall! How’d you do that?” The girl stepped out from under him, expecting him to fall any moment.

The boy grinned down at her, and crawled quickly across the ceiling to the vent. He didn’t know why, but he could stay on the ceiling as easily as he could on the floor. With remarkable strength, he pried off the vent covering. The screws that had held it in place fell down, nearly landing on the girl.

The boy stuck his head into the vent. “All right. There’s this short step that goes upward then it goes horizontal from then on. It’s awfully dark too.”

“Fine, fine! Just get in there.” She glanced worriedly at the door. “Eventually they’ll try to break the door down. Hurry up!”

The boy sighed. Girls–always rushing. He climbed into the vent, going feet-first, which was more uncomfortable, but he had to pull the girl up.

She stepped under the vent. “I’ll jump, then you grab my hands. Got it?”

“Yes, yes.” He reached his arms, down and she caught his hands when she leaped up. “Ouch,” he muttered. “You’re weighing me down.”

“Just wriggle backwards,” she said. “Is it narrow in there?”

“Narrow would be an understatement,” he said, grunting as he tried to wriggle back.

“My arm!” she cried suddenly, and he saw the stitching encircling her greenish arm straining, as if ready to snap.

He slid his grip to her wrists, and she grasped his bony wrists.

“Ew, your hands are cold and clammy,” she said, making a face at him.

He didn’t bother replying. He was focusing on the straining stitches...they snapped. She screamed, but he was still holding onto her other arm–her left–and it seemed to be secure enough. That was when he realized that her dismembered arm still clung to his wrist. He tried to shake it off, but when he did that, it sprung up and slapped him hard across the face. This startled him so much that he loosened his grip on her left arm, and she screamed at him.

“I can re-attach it, you idiot, don’t get rid of it!”

“Sorry!” He tightened his grip on her left arm, as her dismembered arm released him and climbed onto his back. He tried to ignore the uncomfortable ticklish feeling across his shoulder blades. “I can’t heft you up now, I’ll just wrench off your other arm!”

“Just try!” she snapped.

Desperately, he reached down with his free hand and grasped a fistful of her hair. She squawked in pain, but he yanked anyway. “Just a little bit more!” he said, trying to pull her up into the vent, and wriggling back.

Something caught onto his ankles, and he gasped. “Something’s got me!”

“Kick it!” the girl said.

He did so, and was rewarded with a pained noise, but his attacker didn’t let go and instead roughly pulled him back, twisting his ankle as he did so.

The boy was gasping and making pained noises, and the girl continued screaming as his grip on her hair tightened. His attacker was moving back fast, dragging the girl roughly into the vent. It was extremely uncomfortable and the boy couldn’t understand why so many people chose vents as their escape route. He doubted the writers of books and screenplays had any idea how uncomfortable and painful it was.

Finally, his attacker must have backed out of another opening and all three fell from a ceiling onto a hard linoleum floor. The boy fell on top of his attacker, and the girl fell on top of the boy. The boy pushed her off, and turned to his attacker with a snarl.

His attacker punched him hard in the nose, and the boy gasped with pain, but was fine a moment later. His attacker looked at him and smiled warily. “That would have broken a human’s nose.”

The boy glared at him, and clenched his hands into fists. His gaze flitted to the girl who was pressing her arm to where it had fallen off from. The stitches went back, tighter and more secure than before. She got to her feet, and walked over to the boy’s attacker, her greenish face set in a scowl.

The attacker was not so very young, he was likely in his thirties. His brown hair was short, and he had a goatee. His eyes were warm and brown and held an amused look in them. He had a barely discernible scar across his right cheek.

“I should have locked you in the cage,” the girl hissed. “Instead of leaving you on the floor.”

“You are not well-nourished,” the man said. “Which explains why you don’t punch hard. And why Andrei doesn’t kick hard.”

“Andrei?” The girl looked at the boy. “Is that your name?”

The boy shrugged, and looked suspiciously at the man, who smiled again. “Were you two trying to run away from the officers combing the building? Were you afraid of being killed?”

The two did not respond, but the answer was clear. The man nodded. “The officers might have killed you. Fortunately you met up with me instead.” He fiddled with a strange hairy bracelet on his wrist. “You, girl, are one of the Frankenstein Company creations, correct?”

The girl didn’t respond.

“I’ll take that as a yes. You,” he turned to the boy, “are Andrei. I saw a bit of your file before all your files were set aflame by some mad doctor.”

“Who are you? And what do you want if not to kill us or experiment on us?” the girl asked, her mismatched eyes blazing. The boy–Andrei–was silent.

“My name is Jacob Roberto. And I came to find you two. By the looks of you, you both have Depth. I thought you might.”

The girl blinked. “Huh?”

“I’ll explain later. For now, just come with me and I’ll take you somewhere safe.” Jacob Roberto glanced over his shoulder. “If you would just be calm and follow me quietly outside, we can get into my car and drive away to a safe place.”

“Why can’t I go home?” Andrei asked, unsure of where home was exactly, but feeling that he would prefer to be there.

Jacob Roberto smiled sadly. “Because it would appear, Andrei, that you are dead and have been brought to life by scientific means.”

“Who was I before then?”

“I don’t know. Your files were burned. I only read that you died at fifteen, not long ago, and you were buried on Van Sicklen Street.”

“Van Sicklen Street where?”

“I don’t know. Come with me, and don’t talk.”

The girl and Andrei exchanged a look, and followed. What choice did they have?

Jacob Roberto’s car was a limousine, they realized when they exited the building. The limousine was parked amidst the shrubbery behind the building. The driver was an attractive young woman who barely looked twenty. Her glossy black hair was tied in a bun, and her straight bangs hung just above here eyes, concealing her eyebrows. Her skin was deathly white, and her heavy-lidded eyes were a dark blue color. Her blazer and skirt matched her eyes, and she had a stern look about her that made Andrei and the girl nervous.

“All right there, Betsy?” Jacob Roberto asked easily, and the woman nodded briskly.

“Don’t let them dirty the seats, Jacob,” she said, fixing Andrei and the girl with a dark look.

Jacob smiled, and opened one of the car doors. “Ladies first,” he said, to the girl, who flushed a nasty darker shade of green, and went in. Andrei followed her, and Jacob Roberto came last, and he shut the door. The car started.

The girl had seated herself on one long seat, and Andrei had sat across from her next to something large that was making snoring noises. Jacob Roberto seated himself beside the girl, who no longer looked as confident as she had back in the building.

Jacob leaned over and tapped the knee of the large being beside Andrei. “Romulus?” he said softly. “Romulus?”

The large being gave a snort, then sat up straight. It was man, Andrei realized, a young man. He had tousled curly brown hair, and keen golden eyes. He was in need of a shave, and his nose looked as if it had been broken once, for it was slightly crooked. He was rather handsome, and wore a grey coat over his shirt and tie. He looked as if he would be quite tall, but he tended to hunch over. His shoulders were broad, but just slightly disproportionate to his body, and Andrei concluded that the young man was very close to his own age, despite the fact that he could have passed for twenty.

He looked from Andrei to the girl, and his already ruddy face turned a deeper shade of red. “Hello,” he grunted.

“This is Romulus,” Jacob Roberto said. “Romulus, this is Andrei and a girl.”

“Don’t you have a name?” Romulus asked shyly, not meeting her eyes.

“No,” she said.

“I will name her later,” stated Jacob. “Like I named you, Romulus.”

Romulus nodded, and looked out the window.

“Well,” said Jacob. “I have a lot to tell you. There are humans in this world, and then there are what humans might call freaks or mutants or gifted or powerful or talented or magical. But the so-called ‘freaks’ refer to themselves as Deep Ones, and their powers, gifts, talents, or magics, are symbols of their Depth. Some Deep Ones call humans Shallow Ones, but I believe that each being must be addressed by what they call themselves. I call humans, humans. I call myself a Deep One. I am a Werewolf.”

Andrei raised his eyebrows. “A Werewolf?”

“By all rights, you should believe me. You are a resurrected corpse, and your friend created by dismembered body parts.”

“Werewolves are fantasy creatures, magical creatures,” said Andrei. “I’m created by science.”

“There is a thin line between science and magic. But let’s not wander on that point–I will go on for hours on it.” Jacob smiled. “I am a Werewolf. Not a Werewolf you read of in novels or see in movies. As a Werewolf, I become a wolf on the full moon, although I have learned over the years how to turn at will. I do not stay the same age forever, but I am immortal. Once I reach the age of forty, I always die, then immediately transform into a living newborn baby and grow up. The cycle is repeated over and over again. I am over a century old now.

“The driver of this limousine is Countess Elizabeth Dracula, a Vampire and the daughter of Count Dracula. She is not immortal, but ages differently than humans. Every six years, she ages one year. So,” he smiled again, “she is actually older than she appears. There are many Deep Ones, and I have yet to find out every kind. There are faeries, aliens, giants, witches, warlocks, wizards (which are different from both witches and warlocks and can only be male), nagas, angels, daemons...I have encountered an invisible boy and a Jekyll/Hyde (which I will elaborate on later). There are others, of course.

“You two are obviously Deep Ones. It’s confusing to be a Deep One among humans, especially when your appearance marks you as a Deep One. I will take you to where I live with Elizabeth and Romulus. You can stay with me and I will teach you.”

"Teach us what?” Andrei asked.

“Oh, the essentials. But also how to control your Depth and how to use it to your advantage. I could also teach you the history of our kind, the Deep Ones, and how to recognize known Deep Ones.” Jacob looked at Andrei. “I will call you a zombie. Your friend here," he looked at the girl, who had been quiet all this time, “I will call a Frankenstein.”

“I want a name, sir,” the girl said.

“Kierna,” he replied promptly.

“Why Kierna?” she asked.

“I like the name Kierna,” Jacob said. “I always have.”

“Thank you,” said Kierna. “I mean it.”

“Very well,” said Jacob, smiling.

Chapter 3: Romulus
Jacob’s new charges made Romulus think of his own past, which was rather odd too. Who his real parents were, Romulus did not know, nor did he know who he really was. For as long as he could remember, he had lived in a forest somewhere in Britain. He had been raised by wolves, or to be more exact, a certain female wolf. She had no name, for wolves bear no names, unlike their domestic brothers, dogs. Dogs are named by humans generally and they learn to respond to their names. The wolf pack Romulus grew up with did not know of names. Romulus was not much different from them. He was not Tarzan of the Apes, so he did not fret over the difference in his and the wolves’ features. They were, by far, hairier than he, had tails, long snouts, ears on top of their heads, sharper teeth, and many other different features, but this did not interest him.

Romulus had a nose that was comparatively short to the wolves’ noses, though by human standards it was average. He broke his nose when he ran into a tree one day, and it healed crooked. He ran on his knees and elbows, just as fast as the young wolves. His hair was a long tangled mess. As a small child, he drank the milk of the certain she-wolf, and once he grew older he ran with the pack to catch animals. He ate raw, bloody meat just like his wolf brethren and wore no clothes.

One night, he was lying in the cave, cuddled with the she-wolf and several other wolves to be warm. He heard someone coming. He listened; it was no wolf. Not a deer either...A human. Romulus nudged the wolves beside him, but they were already rising. Their ears perked up, but they didn’t growl, as they did when displeased or smelled prey.

The pack leader went ahead, and the others followed, Romulus included. Sure enough, it was a human. A man, and he stood unarmed by a tree. The man turned when he heard them coming, and he smiled.

The pack leader hesitated, but after a moment, he ran forward, his tongue lolling out of his mouth. The man knelt and when the wolf came to him, he stroked him, scratching behind his ears as if the wolf was a dog.

The other wolves rushed forward, but only Romulus hesitated. More wolves rushed out of the cave, eager to meet the human. Romulus could not understand. In the past, the pack had killed humans, but now they were rushing to this human with great joy. He saw the human put his head back, look up at the moon, and howl. Howl like any wolf. The wolves eagerly joined the howling, but Romulus did not. He was confused. Confused by this human–this prey–that was treated as, almost smelled like, and howled like a wolf. He did not make the connection that this human was similar to him in any way.

The human stood up after a few minutes, the wolves nipped at his clothes, ushering him to their cave. That was when the human caught sight of Romulus. He made noises that Romulus did not understand, foreign noises that were vastly different from the growls, barks, and howls of the pack. Romulus drew back, fear in his golden eyes.

The human caught his arm, and Romulus, made angry by such direct and unwelcome contact, snapped at him. This time the human drew back. He went into the cave with the wolves, bur Romulus stayed outside freezing in the bitter cold.

A few hours later, the human came out of the caves, stalked over to where Romulus lay and scooped him easily into his arms. Romulus growled, and tried to bite him. The wolves growled their disapproval at Romulus’ attacking the human, and made no move to rescue him.

Romulus was taken from the forest and the wolves, his only home and his only family.

The human was actually not a human at all, but the Werewolf, Jacob Roberto. Though American, Jacob had come to visit a friend in Britain and had decided to stop by the forest one night to mingle with the wolves, who were, in some way, his brethren. He was surprised to find a human boy living there, and the wolves had no problem at all with Jacob’s taking the boy away. The boy didn’t attack Jacob again, although he would attack any other human. Jacob called him Romulus, after one of the founders of Rome. According to the legends, Romulus and his brother and co-founder, Remus, were raised by wolves.

Jacob took Romulus to his home in America, where he lived with his friend of over a century, the Countess Elizabeth Dracula. Romulus would only eat raw meat at first, but after a while, Jacob only gave him cooked meat, and he had to content himself with that. He soon became devoted to Jacob, rather like a faithful dog, followed him everywhere, and slept by his door. Jacob finally taught him how to how to walk on his feet, but even now Romulus hunched over a bit. At first, Jacob thought Romulus to be a normal human boy, despite his being raised by wolves. But after several months, Jacob realized that Romulus was a Deep One. Not as Deep as Jacob perhaps, but he was certainly Deep. Jacob didn’t know if Romulus had been born Deep, his parentage was still unknown, but he had likely become Deep because of the circumstances.

Romulus had excellent eyesight, which was strange for a wolf and a human. He had an acute sense of smell and perfect hearing. He ran as fast as any wolf, even on his feet. Jacob managed to teach him English, but Romulus still remembered his canine speech, and communicated with dogs at every opportunity. Jacob, as a Werewolf, had a kinship with canines, but even Jacob’s own dog, that he had had for six years, ran to Romulus at first sight, and preferred Romulus to Jacob ever after.
Romulus had grown much during the three years he had lived with Jacob. He was now sixteen, big, burly, and incredibly shy, especially around females.

Chapter 4: Jacob's Depth
Jacob’s house was not quite a house, but a manor. A manor built of grey and black stone or marble, and surrounded by huge grounds, and a woods out back. The closest neighbor was beyond walking distance, which was why it was the safest place for Deep Ones.

It was four stories high, and had an almost countless number of rooms; Jacob himself confessed that he had never bothered to count the rooms. He had lived here for roughly two centuries, half of that time he lived there with benefactors, but later his benefactors died, and Jacob inherited the house. That was all he told them, and although Kierna suspected there was more to the story, none of them ever asked.

They each had their own room, but Romulus hardly ever slept in his, preferring to sleep outside Jacob’s door. Jacob taught them like he had said he would. He taught the essentials, but he also taught them of the Deep Ones’ history. It was unlike normal school, but they did have certain field trips. Andrei particularly liked one trip where they all went to an old forest in another state to visit a group of faeries, whose captain, a rather short (even for a faerie) one with a head of reddish hair and a red mustache (which he twirled unceasingly with his miniature hands) was called Titan.

Kierna liked when they went on a drive to New Jersey to meet a young woman in her early thirties, Tracey Jekyll, that Jacob had tutored around two decades ago. Tracey was a Jekyll/Hyde, which was actually hereditary. Jekylls were generally kind, peace-loving people, but they sometimes turned into Hydes. Hydes were as evil and foul as Jekylls were good and pure. Tracey now was on medication to control her evil side, Lara Hyde. Lara Hyde had actually assisted an evil warlock in his attempt to take over the world two decades ago, but Jacob, as Tracey told Kierna in private, had stopped them and defeated the warlock. Tracey was clearly in love with Jacob.

That was another matter, that Kierna noticed. So many of the girls were head-over-heels in love with Jacob. Tracey also loved him, and so did Elizabeth Dracula. Kierna noticed the differences in the women. The faeries were silly and giggly. Tracey was cheerful and bantered playfully with Jacob, but in her grey eyes was an endless longing. Elizabeth was stern and serious, but so devoted to Jacob. Kierna wondered; what was in this man that made him so appealing? But as she got to know Jacob better, she found herself rather overly fond of him as well.

Jacob was not only admired by the women, but the young men looked up to him in an interesting way. Andrei, though by nature critical, admired everything about Jacob and drank in his every word. Romulus was like a watchdog, sleeping at Jacob’s door, and following him everywhere.

Elizabeth was not well-liked by Kierna, but the dislike was mutual. Elizabeth also disliked Tracey, so Kierna realized Elizabeth just generally disliked most women. Elizabeth mostly ignored Romulus and Andrei, but one particularly cold night, when Romulus was sleeping outside Jacob’s door, Andrei saw Elizabeth drape a blanket over the sleeping youth’s burly form. Elizabeth did help Andrei find his books one day when he had misplaced them, so Andrei could not really dislike her.

Jacob seemed to like everyone. He had no obvious love for any of the women who trailed after him looking lovesick, nor did he make any indication that he was aware of their strong affections. He sometimes got into strange dreamy moods, and at those times, he would either go to the woods or lock himself upstairs in a mysterious room that was kept locked at all times and forbidden for everyone. Even Elizabeth never trespassed.

There was something about Jacob. Kierna, who communicated by mail with Tracey, mentioned this. The Jekyll/Hyde’s response was short but strange : There is certainly something about Jacob. An eternal sadness, an everlasting loneliness, and a perpetual wait for something that might never come.

It summed up Jacob perfectly.

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12 Aug 2005:-) J riley Riley McCool
A very good start. Longer then i like to read in one sitting but i am killing time today/ the first chaper moves fast but then you hit sort of a slow point of explaing what was going on and i almost went on my marry way but hung in out of morbed facinaltion of wanting to know where you planed to go with this.
23 Dec 2009:-) Lieke Voois
An amazing start!
It’s full of fantasy and so catching, you just want to read more and more 12
I Adore it
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