|23 Nov 2002|| Anonymous|
I Think i´m going to read the whole story...
|17 Jan 2003|| Hattie|
Wow, I think this is actually very like Terry Pratchett/Douglas Adams stuff! And I LOVE it! ;D
I myself want to be a writer ^_^;; (Eh..heh, like it's gonna work for me! -.-)
But what I have most trouble with is the introductions, how you slowly and easily slide from subject to subject whilst maintaining a smooth flow to your writing.
I agree with the two above, that this is such an eye-catching start you so just want to buy it and read it again and again!
|20 Jan 2003|| Devon|
I aggree w/ the 1st 2 ppl
|20 Jan 2003|| Brittania of mirkwood|
Hi i've read an incredible lot of story/book/scripts and many such media types, so i know what im saying when i write that i think this story is really some good stuff, indeed it does have a touch of douglas adams (he the best!). The character depth and setting intro are deep, interesting, thourough and yet they dont go on and on and on (unlike this comment!). It is always said that a good intro raises more questions than it answers, and i think u have done this to the utmost! Have u published it?
I hope to get published someday, it might help if i actually finish something...
|15 Jul 2003|| Anonymous|
Wow. just wow. im gonna go read the rest now. Namarie si an, melanin.