Hi and thanks for the compliments on my art. I see you write, cool!

Rebecca Zuckerman replies: "Yes,I write.I draw,too,though not extremely well.seeing that you signed anonymous,I dont remember you,but if I commented Im sure I liked your art thanks for stopping by my page!"

Hi ^--^ i haven't read anything except your biography... But that's good. Describes someone similar to me =)

Rebecca Zuckerman replies: "well, thats interesting... thanks for stopping to read my bio!"

Wotcher, I’m snowed under with work right now, but I am intrigued by your titles and grateful (if minorly perplexed) for the faveing, so if I haven’t returned in a while, feel free to come and non-literally prod me. Or just hang out in the craziness that is my mainpage.

[a punk mime who looks like he’s probably called "Ted" leaves a Happy Muffin for Rebecca]

Rebecca Zuckerman replies: "Muffins make me happy Don’t be perplexed on the fave, I tagged your story because it’s hilarious and it rocks! Thanks for dropping by my page."

Thank you so much for the tag!!!

Rebecca Zuckerman replies: "Your welcome and you deserve it! I like to bookmark my favorite pieces "

I am glad that you have liked the story of Levex Malsvir, I probably will not continue writing it because almost no one really seem to take interest in it. You have been the first person so far. Anyway, as for the not really wanting to destroy the world. Levex Malsvir is only wanting to create his army so that he can use Terra (Earth), such as there is a heaven and hell. Heaven has it’s army, hell has it’s army, and Levex wanted to have one of his own so that he may take revenge on those who have cast him out (both heaven and hell). Also set in his mind there would no longer be life or death, but good, evil, and purgatory. Purgatory would be his land, Terra.

But I did write a second part to it, it seems more like a journal of Levex though and I don’t think it came out well. Anyway, I hope to hear from you again sometime and please feel free to leave comments on some of my drawings as well. I shall also take a look at some of your work. Thanks for your time.

Time is the creation of everything, yet the destruction of it all.
Robert D. Ames

Rebecca Zuckerman replies: "I think the best reason to write a story is because you are interested in it. I understand being discouraged when others overlook your work, though.
I understand the overlying plot a lot better now, thank you.
I’d be pleased to take a look at your art. Thanks for commenting!"

Hi! Thanks for your criticism... First of all, it’s been such a long time that I had even opened this website, so it’s nice to see that someone actually reads my stories.

I can try to explain to you some of my ideas from the time I was writing this kind of fictional work.
Somehow I wanted Crys age to be unknown until I had gotten her identity and characture put into place. I wanted her to keep the childish mind she had had when she was younger, living a very picturesque life with her parents.

About the mirror-issue: Crys was probably ashamed or embarrassed about her looks or features, as they were that which made parents drive her away from them.

About her father: Could he perhaps have a drop of love or fatherly feelings for her, even if she was something that was shunned and a creature that parents killed. Could a man so vile and cold still love something that he gave birth to?

I don’t about other teenagers, but many of my friends have had suicidal thoughts in the past. Crys is loosely based on all those teens that have suffered the feelings of not being loved or appreciated. My friend, who was the inspiration for Crys, has actually had the same kind of thoughts that are pictured here. My friend and her mother never got along, my friend being a bit different then what her mother had expected.

About her survival for six years in some desolate cave... I actually have nothing to say. Perhaps she survived solely on berries, wild fish and game?

This was everything that I could come up with. Thank you, once again, for your constructive criticism . I really appreciate it that you took your time to read my story and ask these questions, that I assure you, I hadn’t even thought of at the tome. I’ll see what I can do about a re-written version. In dew time, that’s all I can say. I have my first matriculation exams coming up, so my spare time is very limited.

//. B

P.s ( My real name is Rebecca)

Rebecca Zuckerman replies: "Yeah, its always nice to come back to Elfwood after a hiatus and kind of... rediscover it.
Thanks for commenting back, especially since it helped me realize that my original comment was kind of short and unclear. I think I’ll leave you another one
Again, I hope my advise is helpful and I encourage you to revise the story.
My name’s Rebecca, too. [lol]"

Glad to help, hope I manage to be more active in future...
You might like this fellow’s style, better evidenced over on aldora, though he has a page up here:
http://www.aldoraworld.com/people?p=438Missing [/URL]![/URL]

Rebecca Zuckerman replies: "thanks for the link, I’ll definitely look into it!"

hey! just returning the favour for visiting my page. Thanks for dropping by, I read your poems and they are pretty good, though some are controlled by the rhyme, which i’m guilty of myself. Anyway, good poems, let me know what story you want me to read. Lastly, thanks for your comments on my story The Cartographer’s Key, there’s nothing new with that story at the moment, but hopefully it will be on my to do list, provided i can get some ideas for it.

Sorry, the above comment is from me


Rebecca Zuckerman replies: "Well, thanks so much for reading and commenting! If you want to read one of my stories I would recommend Life After Death, I think it’s one of my better ones. If you have any critiques to offer, please don’t hold back!
Again, I encourage you to continue with the Cartographer story "

[sleepy at present, it being 4 past midnight] d’you follow the webcomic http://goblinscomic.comMissing [/URL]![/URL]? If not i think you’d like it...
uh...that web [pause] comic was Goblins, it decided to make it a link of its own accord so I typed it out...oddness...