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Bjørn Tore Lædre

"Battle for Midnight Ch 3" by Bjørn Tore Lædre

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The Earth Space Fleet has just sent the brand new Battleship ESFM Tellus on its first combatpatrol. The qestion is if its officers and crew is ready for its baptism by fire. The story continues further.
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23 Apr 2008:-) Heidi Hecht
Why don’t they want to go near any human-controlled system? If they’re really alien, I doubt they would be using codenames like "Foxtrot" and "Golf." If they are, it’s interesting that you’re showing it from their point of view! That’s pretty rare.

:-) Bjørn Tore Lædre replies: "The code words are set by Nandi Olsen in the first chapter to catagorize the four Carriers and their escorts in to grups. But I se what you mean, i tend to forget what everyone else knows and what i do in that scenario. I’m taking every suggestion in, Thank you!"
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'Battle for Midnight Ch 3':
 • Created by: :-) Bjørn Tore Lædre
 • Copyright: ©Bjørn Tore Lædre. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Ai, Battleship, Flagship, Fleet admiral, Nelson, Spacebattle, Tellus
 • Categories: Extrateresstial, Alien Life Forms, Fights, Duels, Battles, Spaceships, Ships, Bessels, Transportation..., A.I. (Artificial Intelligence)
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