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Bjørn Tore Lædre

"Battle for Midnight Ch 5" by Bjørn Tore Lædre

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The Earth Space Fleet has just sent the brand new Battleship ESFM Tellus on its first combatpatrol. The qestion is if its officers and crew is ready for its baptism by fire. The story continues but the end is in sight.
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30 Apr 2008:-) Heidi Hecht
This is a pretty good continuation. I’m still wondering who they’re fighting and it might help if we had a better sense of the layout of the ship. I only saw a couple of typos. "Thru" should probably be "through" and "ma’me" should be "Ma’am."
Good crisp dialogue, though. It really sound like a military organization.
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'Battle for Midnight Ch 5':
 • Created by: :-) Bjørn Tore Lædre
 • Copyright: ©Bjørn Tore Lædre. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Ai, Battleship, Flagship, Fleet admiral, Nelson, Spacebattle, Tellus
 • Categories: Extrateresstial, Alien Life Forms, Fights, Duels, Battles, Spaceships, Ships, Bessels, Transportation..., A.I. (Artificial Intelligence)
 • Views: 715

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