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Chris M. Bissette

"Poem - Dryad" by Chris M. Bissette

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There is an old tree in the woods near my house that me and my friend used to play in. Recently I found out that it had been struck by lightning and split in half, and for some reason it upset me, and I got to thinking about what would have happened if the tree had been inhabited by a Dryad...that's where this came from.
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As daylight draws to its golden end
As the last dying rays of the sun are spent
A weary traveller lays down his head
And stares up to the sky above

The golden maiden glides through the trees
Her clothes floating on the autumn breeze
The traveller rises from his cold bed
And looks to the maiden so fair

Oh the sprite of the trees is a thing of bard's tales
A creature of beauty and grace
With golden hair and violet eyes
Such an exquisite and delicate race

But as the traveller looks on in wonder and awe
The still night is shattered by a flash
And thunder rumbles and wind whips the trees
And his entrancement is surely dashed

With a brilliant flash and a mighty sound
Lightning falls from the skies
But instead of passing safely to the ground
It smites an old oak before travellers eyes

And with a sickening crack as the light dies away
The grand tree in half is cleaved
And as the trunk splits in two and falls to the ground
The man can't believe what he sees

As the gnarled old oak is scorched and split
The dryad rushes to be near it
And she cries and screams, falls to her knees
And it seems, too, that she has been hit

For from head to hip a jagged burn appears
And in a flash of white light
The dryad's soul leaves her beautiful body
Now a mangled and twisted sight

This fair maiden is the soul of the tree
And as it dies she must go in pain
Must retun to the ground and the roots of this tree
Return from whence she came

And as this night draws to its evil end
As the last dying sounds of the storm are spent
A mournful traveller packs up his bed
And leaves this place, full of lost love.

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17 Nov 200145 Milady
Chris –
a perceptive approach to loveand fantasy through the study of nature!
The language itself was emotive and effective…. Keep it up! Shame the romantic plot couldn’t be enlarged upon though! Unless there is a sequel in the melting pot? In hope!

:-) Chris M. Bissette replies: "I hadnt thought of doing a sequel to it actually....i dont really knoiw what id do with it...thanks for the comment though....if you have any ideas, let me know. 1"
21 Nov 2001:-) Elizabeth 'Celesta' Kretzschmar
Awww *hugs the poor remains of the tree* Poor things... I've always liked Dryads *nods* *tilts her head* For some reason my mind believes the guy was a mage and he called upon the lightening to do that... to impress her or some such.. not realizing they were connected... *thinks* Or did it to have her to himself not realizing that when the tree dies so does she... *stops babbling* Odd, no? Ah well before I begin listening all the various possiblities in a strange subplots I'll go ahead and say it.. Me likes! Very well written, aye. *prances 'bout*

:-) Chris M. Bissette replies: "Thanx...i think I might do a sequel to this actually...maybe expand on it a bit...thanx for the ideas, though...i'll probably use one of them when I come to do the sequel...i like the idea of the man being a mage...hmm..."
9 Jul 2002:-) Andrea Leslie
You can tell this poem was written from the heart. That you had a genuine respect for the tree and were sad to see it struck down. Those emotions really come out in the poem. I love it!
26 Jul 2002:-) Jakegarbe
Good poem, with nice pacing and imagery. Found this from the Woodworks recommended reading, congrats! Great work!
19 Apr 2003:-) Simon S. Pettersson
I like this one, but it gets... uneven towards the end. And the constant changing of rhyme patterns is cofusing.
4 Jun 200445 Stealthy
This is such a nice poem I used it for my art lyric assigment in school. Feel Proud!
2 Jan 200845 Jerimie fox
Beatiful poem... My neice attempted to draw the dryad out of a tree once maybe yoou could use that as a basis for a sequil?
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About 'Poem - Dryad':
 • Created by: :-) Chris M. Bissette
 • Copyright: ©Chris M. Bissette. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dryad, Love, Death, Tragic, Poem, Traveller, Tree, Lighning, Storm, Sprite, Fairy
 • Categories: Faery, Fay, Faeries, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
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