I've decidied i hate you and you should be shot! You work is amazing. If i could right something as good as silenced nightfall I'd be miles away from this place making money. Your poems, I hate to say it need some work, but I'm a hiprocrite mine need work to. A little constuctive critism don't use such a large vocabulary in few lines, it makes it difficult to read, and they don't flow quite right. I can say nothing for your stories that i havn't said on them, or will (I'm commenting on them after commenting here because I feel like it) I'm so upset, I read 2 3 and 4 but no 1. so sad I think I'm gonna cry now. Newayz, keep upthe good work, I'll be checking back from time to time.

Dude you have a star! Cool! How do you get one? Lol. Great job, i love all your works, you write so well! Keep writing your episodes, lol...Its like watching tv...But without...A tv...Lol. Anyways, i cant wait to read the rest

sneaky dardo i thought it was you who left a comment, but i wasnt sure so i had to come check...thanks alot for the comment, btw!

Hey.... I just wanted you to know that I have had a crush on you since like 6th grade and now you are really cute as an 8th grader.... newayz..... i will talk to you tomorrow... oh ya... by the way... its sunday march 7th if you didn't know thats when i posted this message.... cya in skool! TTYL Bye.....
PS u dance really well....

Brandy!
Im doing an essay on that book A Separate Peace, the author went to Exeter, so, it reminded me of you, and (like the Stalker I am) I googled your name and saw the name Dardo! But anyways, I thought I would leave a comment since I missed you so much. How is school? Texas sucks! I think, that if you really want to call me(because you love and miss me so much!) you can get the number from Grr or Hayley. I got to go now, but I hope to hear from you, I've got your cell # still, but I didnt want to call it in case it wasnt allowed at your school.

by the way- I be joining this website, please come to visit.

Ah, on a whim I found your name on the internet. I've always liked your writings and well, now I've got some new ones to read I hope you'll appreciate some constructive criticism though: you seem to use blood a lot in the works of yours I have read, perhaps another substance, I do also notice you use tears. Or maybe more description beside color, maybe texture or sheen perhaps? Also, you are continually using death. although it is not really boring because of the situations you present with it, there are things worst then death than vampirism. perhaps oblivion, banished from peers into an eternal darkness of worthlessness... oh, well before I start writing a whole poem, I hope you could stand my ramblings. you are quite talented. you do remember who I am right? 'Tis Lyla.
Goodbye, Dahling.

Allright.. here it is.. I love your poems!! I think you did an absolute amazing job with Shadow's Prey. You should do more rhyming poems. Rhyming just helps keep a rhythm!! Absolutely fantastic pieces of work you've got here. You have inspired me to write my own horror poem.. hmm. what shall it be about I wonder? maybe a vampire and his human lover? I don't know!! but I am bowled over!! Please do some more rhyming poems.. you did such a good job on Shadow's Prey.. Oh yes, tell me when you've got more stuff up!!

I just googled my name and this poped up. Well i guess its some thing in the name because i write poetry and song lyrics. So keep it up and you do great work.