| 16 Apr 2004 | Jessie L. Potrie | Loading...Very very nice picture here! You are very good at shading, very smooth. Charcoal pencils dont like me very much, but you are very good at them!! *does first comment dance* Marlčne Blanc replies: "thank you for this very nice compliment!!!i'm still trying to improve charcoal work." | |
| 29 Apr 2004 | Sophie 'Photosoph' Matthews | Loading...I think you said that your work wasn't good enough to illustrate children's books -but I think that this picture is excellent! The two pirates remind me of the movie 'Pirates of the Carribean'. Your shading is beautiful, and I think you definitely draw people very well. The pirate on the right is my favourite! The clothes look great, I really like how you've done the wrinkles in them. I find it hard to draw clothes (and people too), but I can see that you can draw people excellently! Bien fait! The only advice I can really give is that, if it's possible, the eye of the man on the right would look better less dark. Marlčne Blanc replies: "Thank you Sophie! That's true: The eye is too dark !And there's so many other things which could be improved in my gallery...That's really nice to give me advice because I really need objective point of view. Thanks again!!" | |
| 1 May 2004 | Thomas M. Allen | Loading...As a work by charcoal pencil that is brilliant! I used to be obsessed with pirates (and pirate lego) as a kid so this is right up my alley. You have a very good grasp of what a person's face looks like front on and side on. I think you are good enough to try drawing faces at other angles to get a perspective of all 3 dimensions if you know what I mean  Marlčne Blanc replies: "Thanks again! I love pirates's world too! I'll try to do what you proposed about the 3 dimensions .If my drawing is good enough,I'll send you it by email! " | |
| 3 May 2004 | Hannah Hannie O_Reilly | Loading...I love Pirates, I always wanted to be one when I was younger! Marlčne Blanc replies: "Yes,me too!! Especially from the day I saw "the Goonies" movie!! " | |
| 27 May 2004 | Jovana Bogdanovic | Loading...Wow! Wow! Wow! I love pirates! Especially if they are well drawn like here! ()() ('') .__. By the way, all the pics are great! Marlčne Blanc replies: "He he ! Thank you Jovana!! That's a great compliment here!! I love drawing or painting pirate's stuff and scenes! So I'm glad to know that people enjoy it! Thanks for your comment,that's really nice!!" | |
| 8 Jun 2004 | Chris West | Loading...Aaaargh! We be pyrats of deh scurvee seas argh. ... A very good picture, accurately toned, allthough the right man's eye is a little dark, have you considered covering it with an eyepatch maybe? Marlčne Blanc replies: "lol!!! Yeah !! Maybe I should...lolThanks again for your comment my "lil" chris!" | |
| 14 Jul 2004 | J. Scott Moore | Loading...great pic!!! it is very good. my mother is bugging me about my shading. I do realize that it does leave something to be desired, but who doesn't have something they need to work on? great pic though..........love the shading. Marlčne Blanc replies: "Thank you!! I totally agree with you! Improving our art or ourselves is so important!! That gives sense in life...(I think!)Thank you once again for your comment!" | |
| 21 Jan 2005 | Alain Renaud | Loading...Great expression on the left character's face. The shading is overall good, but needs more contrast in some place, like above the left character eye (There's always a lot of shadow between the eyes and the eyebrowes), and below the right one neck (more contrast in dark zone). <br>So he's telling him a secret, Maybe if you had put a hand on the right character near the left one ear, like if he wanted to cover the sound with his hand. It would also put more dynamics in the pic. Good work!!! | |
| 27 Jul 2006 | Ron black bird | Loading...great job!I LOVE PIRATES!!!!!!!!!!!!1 | |