No comments? Welcome to Elfwood! I like your writing...

Brienna *Larae* Critchfield replies: "Wow! Someone commented! *Happy Dance* E'hehe.. ^^' well i'm glad you like my writing. I'm trying my best.... "

Hi ^__^
I remember reading chapter 1 and 2 of this story, and it's great ^^ I hope you'll finish it soon!

Brienna *Larae* Critchfield replies: "Yay!You commented! *Glomps* E'hehe.... ^^' I'm glad you like it so far. I'm trying to hurry....it's hard? "

Heya, you posted on my Wyverns sooo.. I thought Id return the favor, and Im glad I did heh.. Your writing is very imaginative, I love it. What Ive read of your work in progress so far I really liked. Keep writing! Ill be checking.. =)

Brienna *Larae* Critchfield replies: "Thanks! ^_^ I try my best for writing. it's not the best but everyone has their own styles. I'm glad you like mine. I'll be sure to keep updating ^_^"

This story is fantastic! Ive only read the first couple chapters so far, but I really like your idea and concepts for the demons in your world. Excellent work.

Brienna *Larae* Critchfield replies: "Wow! Thank you for your comment. Thanks for reading (unlike some. hehe)I roleplay a lot so I get most of my ideas and creativity from there. Pretty much everything you need from mine is something that actually happened! ^-^ Dankuu!"

You have a great idea, it has a lot of potential. Your story line so far is absolutely awesome. One thing you might consider is to make your story more detailed. It all depends on how you want to set up your book and I'm not sure what you have in mind, so maybe you'll be better off ignoring me... lol But it seems to me that you want to write a long novel. The way you're introducing people and the fact that you have multiple main characters makes me think that, but the way you are so general when you write makes me think you want it for light reading. I love to read, so I have observed many styles of writing, if you want to ask me what I mean just write to me and I'll try to write back soon. *wink* you're doing an awesome job!

Brienna *Larae* Critchfield replies: "Thank you for your comment. That's for saying it has potentinal. I Don't ever get that (Maybe from teachers, but they're paid to say that!) I'm trying as hard as I can to make it detailed. I'm involved in lots of roleplays, so I try to discribe things as I see them in my mind. ^_^; Can't expect much from me. I'm only *cough* 12*cough* 13 years old. ^^;;; Yeah, i'm trying to make a novel. It's ahrder then I thought. I kinda want it for light reading. I stufy from J.K Rowlings books, Hatrry potter even though i'm not a big fan of the books. I've gotten many complements from Teachers, parents, sister (wow, I ddin't know she reads..lol) and friends onlien saying that it is excellent and when they read it, they think it's jsut as good as thr Harry Potter books. I guess that's a good complement. Thanks for your complement. I'm trying hard to do some mroe chapters, but i'm all busy. ^.^"

Hey, my name is Brienna too we spell it just the same i'm 10 ys old. I'v always thought that I had a weird name and I thought that I was the only one that had the name Brienna but I was wrong, I'm so glad I found out.oh and i'm from florida. I hope to get to read your book it sounds enteresting.... hopewe can chat one day.