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Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich

"Excalibur" by Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich

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This arthurian poem is from the point of view of Excalibur, in a tone I don't think Arthurian writters have yet explored. It's mood is depressing, it is Excalibur recalling all the death, grief and sadness caused by it's own life. Excalibur pleads with Merlin to bring him home (back to the lake/mere). Excalibur tells Morgana that it's own blade of life is imminent death, and that death is the only answer. (5-13-03)
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I believe I see thee now,

For time has shattered the thrill

And crushed the innovation of fantasy

And yet I yield to my own despise

I loft my blade about the air

I heed its solemn song

I dance about the grave

 

Abscond thy sheath

And raise your hilt

Forth comes my judgment day

I am thy defiance

To fade adjacent you

I am the dark stone

Of deep crimson regret

Which gathers ever about you

 

I would I were a lark

To lament mine own sorrow

And dance upon the tongues of men,

And seer their words with flames ablaze.

 

I am the dragon of the night

Such wasted splendor do I wield

I am the flower of your lips

Withering cruel amidst the angst

I cry alone to praise your fall

And steal your breath with my sharp fangs

 

Oh Merlin, fable me no longer

I hold neither majesty nor grace

For from the air and depths of darkness

Did I commence to thy damned reign

Oh Bard of life, return me now!

The shadow shall unfold

 

Oh Morgana, lay me down to die

Thus ends the malice of your dawn

Let spite enclose, and wickedness perish

If Tis’ my blood be called

Oh Queen of Menace! Summon me no more

My life is thine own end

 

 

←- Embraced thy seething bough | Gryphon -→

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5 Jun 2003:-) Esmeralda Eli
Beautifully written! I absolutely love it! Especially the way you wrote it, it's very clever! I especially love the subject! This is so excellent!
17 Jul 200345 Carolin Emily Southern
It is amazing. It may be better laid out if it were one long poem, than a group o verses of unequal length, it would flow better, as people sto naturaly at the end of a paragraph, apart from that lovely.

:-) Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich replies: "Thank you, a good suggestion, I should reformat it. "
21 Jul 2003:-) Leigh *Shwin* Erickson
*agrees with all comments above* This is beautiful! yes! And very original! Wonderful!
11 Aug 200345 Heather 'Istara' Sluys
Very nice ^_~

I love Arthurian legend, but unfortunately my knowledge doesn't go too far beyond what I've read in "The Once and Future King" . . .

Gotta start reading "The Mists of Avalon" one of these days . . .
4 Sep 200345 Anonymous
You are a real budding talent. Keep writing!!! Please.
19 Dec 2003:-) Jennifer L. Post
I love it! Your style of writing is sooooo cool! *smiles* It reminds me a little of Shakespear. I don't think I've ever read anything about Authorian Legends rold from this point of view. Great job!
26 Oct 2005:-) Annalee Flower Horne
Lovely stuff!

Yay arthurian poetry!
3 Nov 2005:-) Dan Shevock
This is skillfully written. Impressive. Wonderful concept.
2 Jun 200945 Sçäthäçh
Great poem 222222222222222222222222222222:- )222222 LOL
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About 'Excalibur':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich
 • Copyright: ©Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: King arthur, Camelot, Excalibur, Morgana, Morgan le fey, Sword, Merlin, Wizard, Grief, Sadness, Death
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Royalty, Kings, Princes, Princesses, etc, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Warrior, Fighter, Mercenary, Knights, Paladins, Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers..., Celtic
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