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Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich

"Immortality" by Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich

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I've noticed that many writers, or artists like or depict the immortality as appealing, mainly because they lack it. When I wrote this, I wasn't sure what it was about, and now I am. It shows the side of immortality being limited and unpleasing. Odd, right? It's sort of meant to be weiten in a horror genre.
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Immortality

 

Let all who bear true knees now bow before me and taste mine dark regret. Let loose your hair of dew and draining breath to rush upon thy dullest blade. Serrated thence shall bring sedation, doth torn away by suffered throne, cruelest salvation.

To venture forth, into yon grave, awaiting bliss, perhaps thy pleasure, fine infinity. Thou dwells anon, for here resides false raven’s word, the woeful, lost virginity, thy lacking force, mourned forever more, deceased, sufficed of forged divinity.

Fevered eyes, live every sickened moments end, for blooming flowers wither forth, yet frowning in utter discontent when thine eyes rest upon it’s stolen grace. A lullaby of bitter truth, an accolade set light upon thine face, mends serpentine to lace, a faded, cruel embrace.

Thy crimson ribbon coiled thin about mine neck, thou shalt ne'r release. Whilst glooming wind now gushes forth, ever slicing, still penetrating older wounds. Wrinkled, willowy regret chases near, upon thy fairest brow. They shall never heal, nor disavow.

←- Gryphon | Impure -→

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26 Aug 2005:-) Jo E. Whincop
Ok, I just read your blurb... yeah I know I skipped it... but I love your depiction of immortality and definatly agree with the concept that it would be unpleasing and sort of empty...
Plus, the only true way to gain immortality would to make name for yourself, become a legend! and even that has it's disavantages...
I mean, imagine how many times people would change your story and the truth of it. Hearo's of fables and myths could of easily been viewed as villians if not for a majority. What if Snow White was really a snotty little twit or Perseus was really some weakling...

Sorry... I'm crapping on... well, like your idea on this one. Sorry again...

~Dhom
26 Aug 2005:-) Jo E. Whincop
It's beautifully written and captures, you could say the "essence" of immortality.

I agree with the comment before this when they say that the writing just flows and rolls off ur tongue.

You create such immagery... love the oxymorons! (little obsessed actually)

Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

~Dhom
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About 'Immortality':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich
 • Copyright: ©Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Immortality, Immortal, Blood, Gothic, Goth
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers..., Celtic
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