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Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich

"The Siren´s Calling" by Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich

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This is about a Siren who sinks a ship of men by singing (pretty standard)but then ironically feels remorse afterward for the lives she's wasted. (6.4.03)
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The Siren’s Calling

 

 

I scour close with mists ablaze

Amidst thy haze of mortal breath

Deposed of gods and beasts alike

Lured on by lust’s untimely death.

 

Dove of faint dawn, astray, depraved

Peak of thy spear, wicked, unsaved

Fiend’s incensed tongue, smoldered, bereaved

My touch deemed sinful, soft yet enslaved

 

I saunter nigh, alight with song

Deceit thence wanders, on mine eye

Upon my verse, thou hast no bounds

Within such yearning truths, I lie

 

I purr, I hum, I moan, I strum

Mine eyes do yearn, and call thou near

Thence traced the parting of yon lips

What reason hast you forth to fear?

 

“Adjoin, Brave Knight, alls not been lost!

Come hither men, waves hinder welcome,

Prithee, Good soul, mine arms exhaust,

Reach forth, drown’d slum, limbs chore not numb”

 

Thine face turns pale, to death anon

For under waves, thence shall you dwell

Hailed of the deep’s shrewd, slyest siren’s

Do I but cry thy last farewell.

 

Thy lume of peaches withers forth,

Upon your lips, fade not too much

Thou breathest not, nor fare along?

Dethroned my love with yonder touch?

 

Aurora breaks, red light dost shine

Blood of thy innocence, spilled ere’ night

My cunning soul, I shear, I bleed!

Though none shall hear mine own contrite.

 

 

 

 

 

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20 Jun 200345 Caroline Boisvert
Where do you get your inspiration? As good as ever. You are so talented!
11 Aug 200345 Heather 'Istara' Sluys
Again, beautiful . . . if I keep reading your poems I may run out of else to say ^^;; I only aspire to one day produce such things.
26 Aug 2003:-) Steve Doyle
I love this line: "Lured on by lust’s untimely death."

One wouldn't suspect that the Sirens felt remorse--but then why would they not? Excellent!
4 Sep 200345 Anonymous
Stunning!
18 Sep 200345 Bryn Elizabeth Lepley
uummm.... aaaa.... woooow.... *speechless* you're really really good! I can't even begin to describe! I keep on reading and your stuff just gets better and better!
29 Sep 2008:-) David of Valio
way better than my poem of a siren
here is mine

The Siren


although i have serched all around
This voice that sings cannot be found
iv serched for years for this beautiful sound
iv serched in the sky and serched on the ground


This voice that sings an angelic tune
i heard it once, upon a full moon
it led me to a bright lagoon
the sound i heard it ceased to soon


where oh where could this voice be
this voice that sings other worldly
iv serched on the land and iv serched in the sea
iv looked for it nightly and serched for it daily


Again i hear this angelic voice
the sound it brings with it rejoice
A girl i find by the lagoon
the one that sings this wonderous tune


A thick fog comes in from all around
But still i follow her wonderous sound
I follow untill theres no more ground
I slowly lose breath and then i drown


this was my second poem i ever wrote so i think its not so bad for a noob 2
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'The Siren's Calling':
 • Created by: :-) Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich
 • Copyright: ©Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Death, Lust, Mermaid, Remorse, Sea, Seduction, Ship, Sing, Sink, Siren, Waves
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Romance, Emotion, Love, Royalty, Kings, Princes, Princesses, etc, Celtic
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