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"The True Ballad of the Lady of Shalott" by Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich

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This is very similar to the original “Lady of Shalott”, yet I made my own ideas of her emotions. The back round I created in this ballad is that The Lady of Shalott is under a curse that she must stay in a tower, and if she leaves, she will die. She sees Lancelot in his armour and falls in love with him, and he stays with her for a while, but he sees Gwenhwyvar and falls in love with her, leaving the lady of Shalott. She still loves him, and knowing that she will die, she sails to Camelot (“Elaine lay as though she smiled”) and dies of grief, or of a broken heart before she reaches the shore. (5-13-03)
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The True Ballad of the Lady of Shalott

 

 

I hum my song alone at last

Amidst the towered wave

For so long did my passion thrive

For with me, make thy grave

 

I dreamt a dream of golden eyes

Whose stare doth pierce my soul

Adorned in armour well and rich

For past me did he stroll

 

“Dear Knight, do hear me!”

I cried aloud, for thus his eyes did wrong

A curl did form on his fair lips

And sang a faeries song

 

Unlocked the curse, destroyed the hex

And took me for his wife

Methinks my tower sees some joy

Now none would know my plight

 

But thine is fickle, sees no sorrow

My love is wretch and woe!

And bitter light must turn again

To Gwenhwyvar it did go

 

I see thee tread, with grace and pride

And to the window he did look

And smiled then a somber grin

A thousand kisses then he took

 

And of the spell, I dare not speak

For love forbids my wayward tongue

With one embrace, he took his leave

What more could I have sung?

 

I waited then, to no avail

The answers yet doth known to me

I see my love will not return

My sorrow is mine own decree

 

“Leave not” I know, but I must go

For thy love’s one last time

I pray my death come quickly now

Thus joy is all but mine

 

So here I wait, for fate to turn

Why must the sea be ever vast?

For this is my last breath to give

I hum my song alone at last

 

 

 

 

 

 

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16 Jun 2003:-) Lorianne C Benton
Kathleen, this is beautifully done. The Lady of Shalott has always been one of my favorites. I believe that you have truly captured Elaine's emotions and thoughts, which is extraordinary. I commend you on this achievement. I also thank you for visiting my own site. I hope to return here soon and read more of your works.
21 Jun 2003:-) Kelinor3
this is lovely, the writing is so emotive... i love the ballad, and this just makes it seem more real, another viewpoint. Yay! ^___^
18 Jul 2003:-) Natalie Paquette
I love to hear the many interpretations of Elaine, from Tennyson to modern fantasy/historical authors. And I've always been a sucker for ballads. ^-^ Tragic romances make them just all the more intriguing. If you enjoy the subject matter, I suggest you read the novel "Queen of the Summer Stars" by Persia Woolley - it's the only Arthurian tale I've found as yet in which I actually like Gwenivere, and she has some rather insightful things to say about the beguiled Elaine.
But, anyway - about your writing. 12 I think it's beautiful and you've captured that complex set of emotions that Elaine is feeling just perfectly. Bravo!
19 Jul 200345 Madeleine Rose Ebacher
Hello, I wandered upon your page, and since I love "The Lady of Shallot" by Tennyson, I thought it only fit for me to comment. This is an interesting perspective, from within the character. I felt a little starved for discription though - you have the emotions well placed, but I didn't get as good a sense of environment. I am, after all, comparing you to and old-dead-guy, but still. Just thought I'd leave you those words. I like this version, I've always intended to draw a scene from "The Lady of Shallot". It's a beautiful story.
11 Aug 200345 Heather 'Istara' Sluys
Have you ever heard "The Lady of Shalott" sung by Loreena McKennitt? I believe it's Tennyson's poem, but it's a beautiful song!

I really like your twist in this take on the tale . . . bloody Lancelot XD Just can't keep his hands off the women.
4 Feb 200845 Hina mir
what was the actuall curse of lady of shalott and what was her name?

1 May 200845 Jess
this is a beautiful carry on thingy from th original beutiful poem, the lady of shalott. i enjoyed reading the original ballad but this was vaguely familiar in a way that i seem to have read it before i think it is a lovely interpritation but i am sure that it is not your original...
if you wish to prove me wrong,, do so
i dont know how you would but oh well
it is a good poem and the basic words and easy storyline to it are ok for, say, a teachers point of view but i think you could make it a bit longer.
Love you loads
From
Jess
xxxx
2 May 200845 Kathleen
jess, thanks for the comment, and yes, it is in fact, mine. wrote it when i was fourteen and enamored with the pre-raphaelite brotherhood and lord tennyson. I’ve done my research and its 100% origional
14 Jan 200945 Jerome
all of u hu commented on dis r neeks man im just lookin at it becoz it is for my homework
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