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Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich

"The foreign harlot of blades" by Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich

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The rhymes are broken, I know, I'll remedy that when I'm granted time. This is based on the song, schism by third eye open. Every sword motion, thought, emotion, etc. was illustrated in the music, so I decided to write it down. Once in the middle, and then at the end, there is a gradual, decending type sound that I imagined was the blade of the guillotine falling. I wouldn't understand this if not for the story in my head, so if you dont want me to ruin it for you, stop reading. The story begins with this couple in love, I guess they were in the queen's bed, her husband finds them, and since he's royal (crown - crown of thorns to show his cruelty) her betrayal is treason. Like King Arthur and Guenevere, except Guenevere deserved it. Anyway, the narrator (the man she was in love with) escapes, because he can do little else - stay and die - or leave and try to save her. So he does, and it's the hardest thing to watch the king sentence her to death and stay quiet. He watches in the crown as she dies (first descending sound), and is powerless to do much else. Well, he goes crazy, starts killing everyone in sight.(honestly, the song is perfect for this) I remember the music went well when he would fall a few times, or someone's sword would slash his face or something but I couldn't add it in this miserable poem. They catch him, finally, decide to kill him on the guillotine too. (why not, its right there) He feels a drop of her blood in his shoulder before he is killed. I didn't add this in the poem (I can't find an eloquent way to say it) but the very end was both their heads in a basket. (heh im sick) I guess the point was that they were together in life and death. I tried to make a visual point to their....'togetherness' so I made it her hair wrapping around his fingers or something, so it happens in the beginning, and at the end, her hair wraps around his lips.
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Her hair would lock about my finger –

In sure pleasure that would linger

-         There, below her neck

Lest he who she betrayed,

With crown of thorns deranged

Severed her hair from its sweetest grasp

 

Though my restraint still clings like an army of feathered demons whose claws forced through my lips, forcing me to remain silent.

 

We stood somber in the crowd,

That cruel device and I

Condemn my love to still the beating of her heart

My cloak cast its shadow on the square,

Upon the cruel fiends empty stare

 

-         Her shoulders torn then, from her hair,

-         warm blood that mingled with the air.

 

A gaze was frozen on her face,

Her soul departed from my pace,

 

My limbs not void of error, so stunned my eyes, wrought in terror.

 

I loft my sword above my sheath,

and raise my hilt to all who paint

their pious wound upon my sinless siren

who left her then ,without restraint

 

My labor wanes,

my blade strikes wise,

The rain beat knives upon my eyes –

My death dance fails as passion dies.

 

Their scythe but cleans my frenzied lips,

As bloodless scars are formed and ripped –

 

My hands are bound and led along

As Camlann stained her finest spawn, upon my lovers grave –

 

-         The scimitar shivered, wistful and lissome. Blood fell like a weeping devil mourning her last sacrifice –

-         Sharp teeth let loose its grasp upon it’s keenest curse – Her hair still locked about his stolen verse.  - 

 

 

 

 

 

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'The foreign harlot of blades':
 • Created by: :-) Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich
 • Copyright: ©Kathleen Morgaine Haubrich. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Blade, Blood, France, French, French revolution, Guillotine, Harlot, Romance, Tragedy
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Fights, Duels, Battles, Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Romance, Emotion, Love, Royalty, Kings, Princes, Princesses, etc, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Warrior, Fighter, Mercenary, Knights, Paladins
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