Welcome to the Library! Looks like you've got a great start here, and plenty of passion, so keep it up!

Zach Dixon replies: "Thanks for the encouragement, i'll try and check out your place see ya"

Good start! Post somemore soon, and let me know when you do, so I can read them. Thank you for visiting my gallery!!

Zach Dixon replies: "I am working on something now that might be while, cause of my school and stuff (got to get ready for exams), and I'll be sure to tell when the new story gets here, and also it was a pleasure to visit your gallery as well."

Well, your stuff is really good, lots of potential, however, you need to work on spelling and grammer. I was so drowned in the lack of grammer and wrong words that my mind just gave up. Your work has lots of heart and soul put into it, but you need to make sure it's all done right so that people can appreciate it. Some mistakes are ok, I make plenty, but that's why I read my stuff over so many times I'm saying the words in my sleep! I even dream about my own stories! Anyways, thanks for visiting my neck of the woods, was just returning the favor, and remember, better grammer. (I feel like I'm a parent... *grumbles*)

Zach Dixon replies: "Ya I know grammer, spelling, all that. I am actually working on editing Frost Giant (it takes a long time for me to do any thing really) so it should be done soon, I hope, well what I mean is I'll try to to try. I am confusing my self (smacks self in the face to bring self out of confusion). Any way thanks for the advice come cabk soon "

*cough* GRAMMAR *cough*

Yeah, yeah, I'm a spelling / grammar-nazi. Get used to it

Lots of potential, laddie, just work on said grammar and everything will be right as rain.

Welcome to the Woods. May your stay be pleasant. Ignore the mumbling fool in the corner.

Zach Dixon replies: "Yes grammer I know, must work on it and all that stuff, I need an editor to do this for me, well maybe one day. *sighs* Thanks for stopping by, and the fool in the corner he'll be taken care of soon enough *evil laughter*. Well bye then ."

Hi there! Looks like you joined just a bit before me!

When I tryed to get into Frost Giant my computer freaked and I tryed to gewt into the page a few more times, but it still wouldn't let me. I would have left a comment on it, but oh well - I'll have to try again later.

Please let me know when you've updated, so I can come again! Until then, I'll try to remember to stop by. Nice meeting you!

Zach Dixon replies: "  You see what happened was when I sent in my new version of Frost Giant in I didn't put it in HTML form so it screwed every thing up. I am going to fix it,it just takes about 10 days to send in another ticket to the mod's. I'll be sure come by your place to tell you when I do get it in, and to look at your stuff,thanks for dropping by. "

I absolutely LOVE your stories. The passion, the detail...they are all so wonderful...I only have one thing to say and its not really a saying to say either... More of a request...please i am begging you please finish story 1, i started reading it and now i am hooked I just have to know what happens or is that the end of the story that they travel together and that is it? just some thing i was wondering, i loved the stories though and good luck with further writings...Sincerely, Seline

Zach Dixon replies: "  No it is not over. I am about 3 pages into the second chapter of it in which you'll be meeting a few new faces. I don't know how long it will take to put up cause...ya, other things to do. Well thank you for commenting! And the new chapters are up now."

You've got lots of potential here. You've certainly got lots of ideas, characters and storylines; the only thing aside from the afore-mentioned grammar I could offer is stylistic (and something I'm guilty of too, heh). You seem to like descriptive detail inserted in these long run-on sentences. Your mind seems to work at least twice as fast as your editing eye! Anyhoo, lots of eye for space, lots of passion. Keep it up.

Zach Dixon replies: "Yes...editing. I really need to get someone else to look over these before I send then in, it is getting be a pain. So I shall try to track some people down...lol, any way thanks for the comment!"

OMG you are such an amazing writer! Your imagery is amazing and I am totally hooked on your "story 1 and 2" Please continue to write them. Also please continue with your story about the vampire which I can't recall how to spell at the moment because I absolutely love it!...You should get some one to check out your grammar but I mean it doesn't take anything away from the story but it just makes it a bit easier to read...I really hope you post more soon because I'd love to read it.

Zach Dixon replies: "Well...thank you! Right now I am a bit into Chapter 3 of The Story. And I am working on Caliesil as well. So it might be a little while before I get any thing else. Though I am sure I will make some time for writing. I always do...lol. Also I am glad you like the stories, thanks for the comment!"

Well written. You know about spelling and grammar so I won't mention them - sorry I did. (Forgive me I am a parent).
The story line is good, I enjoyed the three chapters. A few jumps of logic that meant I had to go back and reread. But all in all very good. Keep writing and getting better.

Zach Dixon replies: "Thanks for the comment, it's ncie to know that adults find it good was well."