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Carla K. Anderson

"Unicorn´s Dance" by Carla K. Anderson

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A unicorn, with dancers’ grace

Delicate and regal

Prances lightly o’er the earth

Swift and born of light

Thinly spiraled aureate horn

Aloft on high proud head

Almost piercing the brilliant sky

Celebrating all creation

In a dance of peace and joy

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21 Feb 200345 James Sebring
Oh my god! This is really good. Puhleeeeze Put up more poems!!!!!!* Does second comment wiggle*

:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "Hehe. I'm a little short on time and inspiration but as soon as my current ticket gets through I'll post a riddle/poem I wrote as part of my story."
28 Feb 2003:-) Emilie Aurora Finn
There is a sense of music in your poetry that I really like. It brings to mind Mozart or Haydn. Excellent job!

:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "Thank you... I tried to capture what I considered to be the essesnce of a magical being's character. "
4 Mar 200345 Kevin Smith
This is very good poetry, much better than the crap in the English books at school. This stuff is so inviting, friendly, and charming

:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "*Blush* Why thank you Vulcan! (I think so too-- Shhh! Don't tell!) "
18 Apr 2003:-) Rose 'Lady Edana Rós' Pratt
Beautiful, and delicate, love it "sister".

:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "Thank you Edana *grins*"
14 May 2003:-) Michelle Badger
Thats really nice. Kinda flowing too...as if the unicorn IS dancing....

:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "Thank you, I was tryng to portray a sort of dance with words 2"
6 Jun 200345 Robin 'Shorty' Fry
Once again I love it, I can never seem to write a poem that doesn't Rhyme I'm not sure why just can't seem to. That makes me Envy you more you can write it and make it sound good no matter what.

:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "Oh, thank you... I tend to have trouble, myself, with rhyming poetry... I find that 'free verse' is supposed to bring to mind images, and that's what I try to do. "
18 Sep 2003:-) Maya R. Hirschman
Lovely cadence and inspiring of a drawing. Can one inspire OF? I don't know. Very nice, regardless.

:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "Thank you 2 I believe one 'provides inpiration for' a drawing 10"
20 Sep 200345 Ydobyna
There is little more to say, except that I am very impressed to find someone equally talented with prose and poetry. This poem is simply beautiful!

:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "Thank you... I find I write poetry more often, but that might just be because I have a short attention span..."
20 Dec 200345 Pete Anderson (Writer who has forgotten password)
Now where is the pipe music 10 Atleast .. it made me think of that! (I really should get help for my password... my comments tonight will seem rather wierd) .. A dancing light in the sky/I will not try to copy you.. Great writer my dear friend 2


:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "Ah, gracis por tu commentario 2
It was the image I was going for, hehe... don't worry about copying, think of it as inspiration!"
21 Feb 200445 L. Shanra Kuepers
Awww... That's such a musical and sweet piece. ^_^ It's lovely. Isn't it amazing how much one can say with so little words?

:-) Carla K. Anderson replies: "Thank you 2
Yes, it is...I had fun 'painting with words'"
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'Unicorn's Dance':
 • Created by: :-) Carla K. Anderson
 • Copyright: ©Carla K. Anderson. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dance, Poem, Unicorn
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
 • Views: 527

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