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Carmel D. Shachar

SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by Carmel D. Shachar

Carmel is a lost soul, born into the wrong time. She would have liked to be around when Shakespeare was still able to holding a pen, but is willing to comfort herself by writing humorous fantasy and fairy tales.
 
 
 

A Fairy Tale Told Twice
Beauty and the Beast, 1-2
Beauty and the Beast, 9-11
Beauty and the Beast, 19-21
Beauty and the Beast, 6-8
Beauty and the Beast, 16-18
Beauty and the Beast, 31-33
Beauty and the Beast, 3-5
Beast and the Beast, 12-15
Beauty and the Beast, 28-
Beauty and the Beast, 24-25
Beauty and the Beast, 26-27
Beauty and the Beast, 22-23
Fishes and Flies, 1
A Messy Room
Mistaken Nightmare
Romeo and Juliet
Science Fiction Story
Slippery Blades
Slippery Blades, CH 2
Slippery Blades, Ch 3

 
DateNameComment 
29 Jul 2004:-) Heather N. Nicholson
Huzzah, huzzah! A funny, heart-melting, logical ending!!!! Sixteen thousand cheers for B&B!!!!More than infinate compliments to the writer!!!!!(After all, infinity can only last so long....) Was MOST pleased. Loved it. Must now see if other work is half as good *sneaks a glance at list of writings* yes, I think I shall be going now...*attempts to walk hidden in shadows towards story list, then blushes as realized she has just told u exactly what she is doing.* *clears her throat* ahem, *and walks dignifiedly (is it even a word, will she ever get to the book list?) to the list* (appearantly she will)

Yue
20 Sep 2004:-) Brandon ´Red´ Christ
(gives Carmel a baby fox) You have some cool writings! come visit me! See ya later!
1 Nov 200445 Carmel's Secret Admirer
Hey, did you know that Carmel wrote these stories at age 19?!? She's so advanced for her age!! It's startling!!!!! (gives Carmel THREE baby foxes)
1 Nov 200445 Carmel's Secret Admirer
(gives Carmel TWO baby foxes) oh wow, who's the man now?
1 Nov 200445 Carmel's Secret Admirer
Omg!!!!!! Lol!!!!!!!!!!!!! Carmel is so amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
9 Apr 200545 Aeris
Wowee! I loved your Beauty and the Beast story~ ^_^ I love the modern humour in it and the beauty. The last bit was a bit rushed though. Oh well, keep writing! I hope to see more from you soon!

~Aeris ^_^
23 Aug 200545 Reefpip
I think this is more about B & B falling in love than about the fight, so it didn't really bother me that the ending was a bit abrubt. Quite an enjoyable story.
1 May 200645 Juliaer
Oh yeah just a suggestion on one other thing to maybe make it better: Have him turn back into a beast in the end. Seriously, who wants a handsome prince? I always used to cry in the disney version when he turned back into a prince. Stupid disney.
1 May 200645 Juliaer
ABSOLUTELY BERLOODY LOVE YOUR BEAUTY & THE BEAST STORY!!!!! YOU ARE A GODDESS!!! IT IS AMAZING!!! anyway, coming out of caps lock, wow that is such a cool story, i love it, and it really cheered me up bcoz im a little depressed at the moment... it really made me laugh. the only think you could do to make it better is make it longer!!!! write more!!! please!
30 Sep 200745 Tessa
OH my I LOVE!!!!! your Beauty and the Beast story and I think you added more since the last time i found yours!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to read it all again!!!!
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